Thanks for the input, John. I had thought about removing the branches below the breast. That’s an easy one, and I may do so. The flight feathers on the left wing are what they are, save perhaps the longest one, which was blending with a branch, and I may have truncated it slightly.
> On Feb 27, 2018, at 2:20 PM, John <sesso...@earthlink.net> wrote: > > On 2/27/2018 10:37, Paul Stenquist wrote: >> I did some more work on the hawk in flight to remove some of the >> offending spruce branches that made the image feel disjointed to me. >> Here’s the revised pic: >> https://www.dropbox.com/s/ru2eu9y706fzf75/8144b.jpg?dl=0 >> The original is here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/sdsvezmykexlqmu/8144.jpg?dl=0 > > I think if you're going to remove the spruce branches above the wing > you also need to remove those below the breast. It also looks like the > flight feathers on the left wing are truncated. > > -- > Science - Questions we may never find answers for. > Religion - Answers we must never question. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
