Yeah, I could do better on the sky. Will get back to it at some time. Sky edits are tough. If you make it uniform, it looks fake, but getting natural gradations is difficult. Paul
> On Feb 27, 2018, at 3:02 PM, Jack Davis <jdavi...@comcast.net> wrote: > > Now that you pointed out the edit, > the different sky tone is a bit > distracting. > Very nice catch, Paul. > > J > > > Sent from my iPhone > >> On Feb 27, 2018, at 11:26 AM, Paul Stenquist <pnstenqu...@mac.com> wrote: >> >> Thanks for the input, John. I had thought about removing the branches below >> the breast. That’s an easy one, and I may do so. The flight feathers on the >> left wing are what they are, save perhaps the longest one, which was >> blending with a branch, and I may have truncated it slightly. >> >>> On Feb 27, 2018, at 2:20 PM, John <sesso...@earthlink.net> wrote: >>> >>> On 2/27/2018 10:37, Paul Stenquist wrote: >>>> I did some more work on the hawk in flight to remove some of the >>>> offending spruce branches that made the image feel disjointed to me. >>>> Here’s the revised pic: >>>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/ru2eu9y706fzf75/8144b.jpg?dl=0 >>>> The original is here: >>>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/sdsvezmykexlqmu/8144.jpg?dl=0 >>> >>> I think if you're going to remove the spruce branches above the wing >>> you also need to remove those below the breast. It also looks like the >>> flight feathers on the left wing are truncated. >>> >>> -- >>> Science - Questions we may never find answers for. >>> Religion - Answers we must never question. >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> PDML@pdml.net >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> PDML@pdml.net >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
