Now that you pointed out the edit, the different sky tone is a bit distracting. Very nice catch, Paul.
J Sent from my iPhone > On Feb 27, 2018, at 11:26 AM, Paul Stenquist <pnstenqu...@mac.com> wrote: > > Thanks for the input, John. I had thought about removing the branches below > the breast. That’s an easy one, and I may do so. The flight feathers on the > left wing are what they are, save perhaps the longest one, which was blending > with a branch, and I may have truncated it slightly. > >> On Feb 27, 2018, at 2:20 PM, John <sesso...@earthlink.net> wrote: >> >> On 2/27/2018 10:37, Paul Stenquist wrote: >>> I did some more work on the hawk in flight to remove some of the >>> offending spruce branches that made the image feel disjointed to me. >>> Here’s the revised pic: >>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/ru2eu9y706fzf75/8144b.jpg?dl=0 >>> The original is here: >>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/sdsvezmykexlqmu/8144.jpg?dl=0 >> >> I think if you're going to remove the spruce branches above the wing >> you also need to remove those below the breast. It also looks like the >> flight feathers on the left wing are truncated. >> >> -- >> Science - Questions we may never find answers for. >> Religion - Answers we must never question. >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> PDML@pdml.net >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
