On 2020-Jul-09, Fujii Masao wrote:

> I attached the patch that renames wal_keep_segments to wal_keep_size.

Looks good in a quick once-over.  Just two small wording comments:

>    <para>
>     Independently of <varname>max_wal_size</varname>,
> -   <xref linkend="guc-wal-keep-segments"/> + 1 most recent WAL files are
> +   most recent <xref linkend="guc-wal-keep-size"/> megabytes
> +   WAL files plus one WAL file are
>     kept at all times. Also, if WAL archiving is used, old segments can not be
>     removed or recycled until they are archived. If WAL archiving cannot keep 
> up
>     with the pace that WAL is generated, or if 
> <varname>archive_command</varname>

This reads a little strange to me.  Maybe "the N most recent megabytes
plus ..."

>                       /* determine how many segments slots can be kept by 
> slots ... */
> -                     keepSegs = XLogMBVarToSegs(max_slot_wal_keep_size_mb, 
> wal_segment_size);
> -                     /* ... and override by wal_keep_segments as needed */
> -                     keepSegs = Max(keepSegs, wal_keep_segments);
> +                     slotKeepSegs = 
> XLogMBVarToSegs(max_slot_wal_keep_size_mb, wal_segment_size);
> +                     /* ... and override by wal_keep_size as needed */
> +                     keepSegs = XLogMBVarToSegs(wal_keep_size_mb, 
> wal_segment_size);

Since you change the way these two variables are used, I would not say
"override" in the above comment, nor keep the ellipses; perhaps just
change them to "determine how many segments can be kept by slots" and
"ditto for wal_keep_size".

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