He has a good point.

Journalists (tech journalists) are not technical people by and large. The article is too long and involved. I think it should be much shorter, much easier to read, and full of quotable quotes.


On 2/17/06, Renan Yson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
On 2/16/06, Dominique Cimafranca <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Thanks all for the comments.  I'm wrapping up the first version of the
<snip>

> A Linux and Open Source Software Primer for Philippine Journalists

<snip>

to me, this is starting to sound more and more like a press release.
not that there's anything wrong with that, and if i understand
correctly, the objective is to promote use of linux and foss software,
which i'm totally for.

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