improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.laute...@proxmox.com> --- v2 -> v3: rebased on current master
v1 -> v2: applied suggestions from oguz [0] [0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038965.html system-software-updates.adoc | 25 ++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/system-software-updates.adoc b/system-software-updates.adoc index 04c17f3..013e171 100644 --- a/system-software-updates.adoc +++ b/system-software-updates.adoc @@ -4,21 +4,16 @@ ifdef::wiki[] :pve-toplevel: endif::wiki[] -We provide regular package updates on all repositories. You can -install those update using the GUI, or you can directly run the CLI -command `apt-get`: +Proxmox provides updates on a regular basis for all repositories. To install +updates use the web-based GUI or the following CLI commands: - apt-get update - apt-get dist-upgrade +---- +# apt-get update +# apt-get dist-upgrade +---- -NOTE: The `apt` package management system is extremely flexible and -provides countless of feature - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for -additional information. +NOTE: The APT package management system is very flexible and provides many +features, see `man apt-get`, or <<Hertzog13>> for additional information. -You should do such updates at regular intervals, or when we release -versions with security related fixes. Major system upgrades are -announced at the {forum}. Those announcement also contain detailed -upgrade instructions. - -TIP: We recommend to run regular upgrades, because it is important to -get the latest security updates. +TIP: Regular updates are essential to get the latest patches and security +related fixes. Major system upgrades are announced in the {forum}. -- 2.20.1 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel