On 2/11/20 5:42 PM, Thomas Lamprecht wrote:
applied series, but not really happy how you just ignored Stefan's and my comment about why you change title capitalization in just a single patch (sys requirements one) to something nowhere else used in the docs..
I'm sorry I forgot to answer that. Our current technical writing style guide states that first and second level headlines should use title capitalization and starting with third level headlines sentence style should be used.
We can of course think about changing that, but changing the style guide too often will be problematic.
Fixed that up and made a few general followup patches, renaming the "USB flash drive" to "Prepare Installation Media" and re-ordering it before "Using the Proxmox VE Installer" which makes quite more sense. IMO, a series and months-of-work effort called "overhauling the documentation" should also care for such details, i.e., do a step backward and see if the general order, flow, .. is all right and somewhat sound. As else I'd rather just have "grammar + typo fixes" getting in in continuous small patches and see bigger effort on expanding the documentation with new content.
This patch series started a long time ago when I was anxious to not break anything (e.g. deep links). Therefore restructuring was saved for later.
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