Hi Zafar,


We just submitted a new revision (-05) to address your below comments. We'd 
appreciate your review of the updates and see if you are OK with the text. 
Thanks.



HTMLized: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement

Diff:     
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-05



Best regards,

Jie (on behalf of coauthors)

From: Zafar Ali (zali) <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, January 29, 2026 2:06 PM
To: 'Yingzhen Qu' <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; 
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Subject: Re: [fantel] Re: [rtgwg] Call for adoption: 
draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-03 (Ends 2026-01-30)

Dear chairs and the WG:

I support the adoption of the draft. It is a good starting point.
Here are some comments that IMO will help refine and focus the document:
*          The term "fast" is a bit problematic. This is because the draft 
lists a wide range of receivers for those notifications, from forwarding ASICs 
to controllers, but their real-time requirements differ by orders of magnitude. 
In other words, the draft needs some focus. Trying to build something too 
generic can result in an outcome that is not suitable for the main target use 
cases. E.g., a solution targeted for handling in the fast path (silicon) is 
different from one handled by control-plane protocols or controllers.
*          The focus should be on the AI workflow, and hence it would be good 
to discuss which deployments we target (scale up, scale across, scale out). Is 
it possible to factor in specific topologies in certain domains, or should we 
generalize the solution to any topology?
*          A clarification is needed that notifications serve a different 
purpose than routing protocols or OAM mechanisms.

  *   Sec. 5.4 discusses "Actions to Fast Network Notifications". Providing 
some guidelines in this document may be fine, but the reaction to a 
notification should largely be out of scope of this work.


Thanks



Regards ... Zafar



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   Modern networks require adaptive traffic manipulation including
   Traffic Engineering (TE), load balancing, flow control, and
   protection, to support high-throughput, low-latency, and lossless
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