Hi On Thu, Sep 18, 2008 at 2:25 PM, William Stein <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > [...] > This will be going on the main sagemath.org webpage, and could be a > superb way of getting > students really interested in sage. I wonder if somebody could > volunteer to read through > the tutorial and make some comments, find typos, etc.? It's fun, not > too long, etc.
>From the "Continuity" page at http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/elliottd/calctut/continuity.html here are some typos and suggestions: [1] You might want to rewrite the snippet "If some function f(x) meets these qualifications from x=a to x=b" as "If some function f(x) satisfies these criteria from x=a to x=b" [2] You might want to rewrite the snippet "One of the more important theorems relating to continuous functions is that of the Intermediate Value Theorem," as "One of the more important theorems relating to continuous functions is the Intermediate Value Theorem," [3] You might want to rewrite the sentence "A discontinuity is any x-value at which a function has an interruption, break or jump -- something that would require you to pick up your pen if you were tracing the function, in other words. " as "A discontinuity is any x-value at which a function has an interruption, break or jump -- something that would require you to pick up your pen if you were tracing the function." -- Regards Minh Van Nguyen Web: http://nguyenminh2.googlepages.com Blog: http://mvngu.wordpress.com --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
