Re: [MOSAIC] Comprehension strategies and Rigby

2008-02-09 Thread Lisa Szyska
Hi,

Our district is considering Rigby's Literacy By
Design.  It definitely uses the Mosaic language, but
I'd like to hear from some of you who actually use it.
 I understand that it is the teacher, not the
materials that are important when teaching
comprehension, but it would still be nice to hear some
first hand accounts of strengths/weaknesses.  It looks
to me that the main strength is the amount of
nonfiction text (about 50%) and the number of guided
reading books.  The rest of it looks pretty generic. 
What am I missing?
thanks in advance,
Lisa
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Re: [MOSAIC] Off Topic~Social Skills

2008-02-09 Thread Beverlee Paul
Be sure to consider the Boys Town curriculum from Nebraska.

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[MOSAIC] Book Clubs/Read Aloud-Middle School-for girls

2008-02-09 Thread Shauna Covell
I’m a literacy graduate student, and I’m in the process of making an iMovie 
about book clubs.  Since book clubs were recently brought up, I was wondering 
if anyone could share about their book clubs in more detail.  I am also 
proposing in my iMovie that teachers create an online (and optional) book club. 
 This is a place where students and teacher (and maybe even parents) can read a 
common text on their own and then share their thoughts in a common place (kind 
of like this listserv).  I would attach a link to the author’s website and 
anything else that relates to the book.  I love books and I want to read twice 
as many books with my students as I could in the regular school day.  I thought 
this might be a way to accomplish this goal, among others.  Any thoughts or 
advice on this would be much appreciated.

Speaking of books, some of my favorites for 8th grade girls include The True 
Confessions of Charlotte Doyle, Chasing Redbird, and Esperanza Rising.  If you 
think these are too long, you could also use The Witch of Blackbird Pond.  I 
also just heard about a book that would be great to read with middle school 
girls.  It’s called Uglies and it deals with all sorts of teenage issues like 
beauty and body image.  The problem is that it’s very long.  

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[MOSAIC] Off Topic~Social Skills

2008-02-09 Thread SooZQ55164
I am looking for districts who have adopted a social skills curriculum.  What 
do you use and how do you assess its effectiveness.  I would also be 
interested  in any checklists related to  what you are doing. We are looking 
into this 
as RTI evolves. Thanks for any help  you can give me!
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Re: [MOSAIC] determining importance

2008-02-09 Thread The Plumtree
Could you please help me fine the "house" lesson?  I looked on the tools 
page but I can't find it?

Thanks,

Marti
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[MOSAIC] Comprehension strategies and Harcourt

2008-02-09 Thread CNJPALMER
Folks
My district is reviewing Harcourt "Story Town" for possible adoption. As I  
looked through a fourth grade teachers guide, I saw some good things, but found 
 strategy instruction somewhat lacking. Looking in the index, I couldn't see  
anything for example, on creating mental images.  Is any one out there  using 
this series? Could you comment on how it works with comprehension  strategies 
that Ellin Keene and Steph Harvey and the like promote? 
 
I also want to know how comprehension is addressed in the primary  
grades...or is it mostly decoding?
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Re: [MOSAIC] Read Aloud-Middle School-for girls

2008-02-09 Thread Jack Stepp
I would suggest Out of the Dust by Karen Hesse.
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> I teach ELL students in our middle school 6-8th grade.  On Fridays I read 
> aloud from grade level chapter books.  We just finished the Watson's Go to 
> Birmingham.  My 8th grade this year is all girls.  They would like me to 
> read a book to just their class that is for girls.
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[MOSAIC] determining importance

2008-02-09 Thread Katrina Kelder
In response to the question about determing importance, I would recommend
Stephanie Harvey's book *Nonfiction Matters*. In this book, Harvey
recommends using a three column chart with students to record facts,
questions, and responses. As the students read, they choose important facts
to record under the facts column, write any questions they still have in the
questions column, and then add a quick response in the third column. This
may be a strategy you could model, have them do with a partner to practice,
and then do on their own while searching for information for their feature
articles. There are other ideas included in the book as well, but this one
was my favorite.



 Another idea is to incorporate the new literacies into your determing
importance lesson. The book *Teaching with the Internet K-12: New Literacies
for New Times* is an excellent resource filled with sites that can be used
across the curriculum. One site mentioned is www.kidsnewsroom.com. This site
has a variety of articles that are written and posted by kids. Perhaps the
students could read articles on this website or any other "kid friendly"
site to practice determing importance. I have found that young children are
highly motivated by technology!



I hope this is helpful!

Katrina (Syracuse University)
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Re: [MOSAIC] Spam: ***SPAM*** Lit Circle Discussion Rubrics

2008-02-09 Thread Diane Baker
I hope its not too late to offer some rubric ideas...I use a rubric for each 
individual to complete about their own performance and preparation within the 
group. I also have a group rubric that they complete together and discuss at 
the end of the meeting. After completing the rubric, the students try to set 
goals for improvement to work towards during their next meeting. I also have 
each member select a 'circle star' for the meeting. Someone they feel did a 
super job that day - for this they fill in a quick sheet identifying why they 
were chosen and what they thought was great about that memebers 
participation...I collect these, read them and make a short comment then sent 
them on to the 'star'...



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I have two, but they are very similar.  The categories are:  participation,
on topic, eye contact, listen/respond to others, respectful to each other.
I recently added volume.  They also have a spot to note what went well and
what they need to work on.  I'm happy to share, but I'll have to get my
current ones of my school computer
Cindy
6th Reading
Middle School


Can you explain the rubric you use?  Are there two - one rubric for the
group and then another for the individual student?








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Re: [MOSAIC] Lead and Stretch

2008-02-09 Thread Kukonis
Joy,
I really I thought I answered this online but maybe I sent off an email  
privately anyway... 
the stretch part of Carl Anderson's work (which I adapted) was taken from a  
workshop he did with my first graders as part of our satellite program with 
TC. 
 
Carl merely said the following in one of the quickest yet most effective  
minilessons I've ever watched."there are three ways a writer can tell more  
about something." They can either: 1. tell what they were thinking about or  2. 
tell what they said at the time or 3.  they can tell the very next  action 
they did. 
 
for example: if the detail was My dog ran away. 
 
Three  ways you could expand on that sentence  are: I thought I  never would 
see Mudge again. or you could write... "Mudge,"  I  screamed hysterically, 
"where are you? " or you could write "Panicking, I looked  under the bed, in 
the 
closet, and around the basement... but Mudge was no where  to be found. 
 
The way I got my first graders to use this information was to scroll  their 
story out as a plan:
 first page- lead and then a stretch for that lead (using one of the  above 
methods)
second page-the beginning event of the story and then a stretch for that  
event.
third page- middle event and then a stretch for that event
fourth page-"outside ending" event and then a stretch for that event
fifth page- an "inside ending" and then a "show not tell" for that inside  
ending
 
This kind of structured writing is taken from Lucy Calkins'   units on small 
moments (writing  across your hands), Carl's ideas from our  workshop, and 
David Middlebrooks' plan of textmapping in other words: story  structure 
happens at a particular place in each genrewe examined many small  moments 
and 
we noticed that the page setup was much like what was described  above. 
 
Hope this helps
Pam
 
PS to the reader who posted the badabing sentence... I tried this out with  
first graders for a memory page we were making and it worked like a charm to  
pull the most important information into one sentence creatively.
For those who don't know the badabing it goes like this: ba (tell what your  
feet did) da (tell what your eyes saw) bing tell what you thought.
a first grader's memory page about our multicultural dance went like this:  
As sweat swirled down my face as I pounded my feet on the stage, my mom's eyes  
locked on to mine. I wondered if the crowd would roar an applause. (fluent  
writer)
another version (early writer) ... My kimono waved on my legs as I watched  
my fan twirl. I worried that my tummy felt too tight. 



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[MOSAIC] Lead and Stretch

2008-02-09 Thread Julie Sosa
I was going through some of my emails looking for more information about "lead 
and stretch", but I just couldn't seem to find the one with all the 
information.  It was in regards to writing and apparently it had a connection 
with Carl Anderson.  I have the email piece below.
 
"Tell me and I forget.Teach me and I remember.Involve me and I learn" Benjamin 
Franklin



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Wow, this is powerful. Tell me more about the "stretch" part.

[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:  . . . Then we created a scroll that was divided into 
five parts: Lead and a 
stretch, beginning and a stretch, middle and a stretch, outside ending and a 
stretch, and inside ending with a show not tell. (The stretches are developed 
from 
Carl Anderson's ideas of how kids can expand their sentence by either 1) 
telling the next action, 2) telling their thinking or 3)telling what they said.


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[MOSAIC] Read Aloud-Middle School-for girls

2008-02-09 Thread Mary Walter



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Date: Sat, 9 Feb 2008 16:23:06 +

I teach ELL students in our middle school 6-8th grade.  On Fridays I read aloud 
from grade level chapter books.  We just finished the Watson's Go to 
Birmingham.  My 8th grade this year is all girls.  They would like me to read a 
book to just their class that is for girls.

Any suggestions for young adult books around 150 pages (we only read aloud on 
Fridays) for girls?

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Re: [MOSAIC] literature circles to Laurie...long)

2008-02-09 Thread mimosa22
Laurie,
It doesn't sound like you have done anything wrong! I think you should continue 
to monitor the groups, allowing those students who still do not seem to get it 
to share their observations of those who are more successful. Reflection on 
what the others did and how he or she could do better the next time may help. 

Third grade students are developmentally diverse, or so I found when I taught 
third. Some students may just not be ready to fully take on the book club 
roles.  I am now teaching fifth grade, and I find that four or five students 
out of 26 come unprepared for lit circle. I have them stay at their desks 
completing their role sheets before they can join the group. This way they are 
still getting the in-depth analysis of the text, which, to me, is the purpose 
of the roles. They are sometimes finished in enough time to join their group. 
Sometimes they are not. We have class discussions about the impact on groups 
when a member is not prepared. Fifth grade children are  somewhat motivated by 
peers to get it together. 

I have an inclusion class in which I know a couple of the children will not be 
able to completely do this yet. However, they continue to benefit by seeing the 
exemplary model of others. At this point in our lit circles, all students have 
the same roles. So each group can see how each student completed the same job. 
We have one more job to go. After that, we'll try the circles with each child 
having a different job. Evaluations (self and group) are also part of the 
learning process for them. This is the most structured I have been in setting 
up lit circles. I have mixed feelings about  the formality of roles. The books 
we use are presented as a choice within our thematic units. We are doing 
"Coming of Age" now and have read ON MY HONOR and FROM THE MIXED UP FILES OF 
MRS. BASIL E FRANKWEILER. When we try the lit circles with different jobs, they 
can choose from BRIDGE TO TEREBITHIA or HATCHET. 

Perhaps you can move away from roles. I rarely used them in third. I would 
rather give all the students the same comprehension task, such as bringing 
three questions and the answers or predictions. Perhaps they would need to 
identify two important moments in the text for the character. This way, even if 
a student did not do a thorough job, they still were lifted by those in the 
groups who did better. They learned from each other and improved. I also tried 
"talking chips" for groups who needed guidance in sharing the conversation. 
Each student was given four two-colored counters. Each time he or she spoke, 
the chip had to be placed in the center. When all of a child's chips were used, 
he or she had to wait for others to use their chips before that child could 
share again. I also found it easier to have everyone in the class reading the 
same book. This way, we could have whole group discussions to supplement the 
smaller book club meetings. 

So hang in there with it. Look at what you want the children to learn from the 
lit circles and focus your teaching there. You sound like you put a lot of 
thought into it!
Best,
Maura
5/NJ

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> Dear Readers,
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> My third grade class is struggling with book clubs this year. I purposely set 
> out to model, model, model what is expected of a book club member.  We read a 
> book in  a whole-group setting and practiced the four roles so that every 
> table group had a chance to experience each role. The roles are: Word Wizard, 
> Summarizer,  Big Idea Sketcher, Question Master, and Character Monitor. We 
> even 
> did a few "fish bowl" discussions where I sat in to model how a conversation 
> works. while the rest of the class sat in a circle around us and observed.  I 
> thought we were ready.  Now that they are half way through the books, I see 
> that 
> perhaps even more modeling was needed. 
> 
> I stressed how important it was to come to the group prepared and how it was 
> their responsibility to get the reading done on time.  I felt that I gave 
> them 
> plenty of time to do the reading and prepare for their jobshowever, as I 
> circulate from group to group during the discussin time, I notice that a good 
> third of the class is not prepared.  They either haven't finished the reading 
> or their job is only half completed.  During the discussion time they get so 
> loud that no one can hear themselves talk.   Again, I've modeled and we have 
> role-played and brainstormedwhat have I done wrong?  
> 
> Thanks for any feedback you might have to offer.
> 
> Laurie Tandy
> Third Grade
> California
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Re: [MOSAIC] literature circles (Laurie)

2008-02-09 Thread Lisa Szyska
Hi Laurie,

First of all, I think what you've done so far is
great.  It sounds like you've taken a lot of time and
effort to help your kids understand what a good book
discussion looks and sounds like.  (I LOVE the idea of
big idea sketcher...totally "borrowing" that from you
btw!)  

>From your post, it is hard to tell if you are
frustrated with the quality of the discussions or the
management issues.  To me, it sounds more like
management (noise level, unprepared members).  If it
is the management, then you might try rubrics for
self-assessment, group assessment and teacher
assessment.  Kids need to hold themselves accountable
and know that your expectations are clear as well. 
This may take care of noise level, turn taking, and
things like that.  Also, since you didn't mention
this, make sure you debrief after groups and make a
list of things that went well in certain groups and
things to work on tomorrow.  The groups doing it well
should know they are doing well and that you're
noticing.

In terms of kids being prepared, I have a couple of
questions: Why do you think some students aren't
prepared?  Is the text too hard to get through?  Is
their group trying to read too much at once?  Are
there consequences for not being prepared for group? 

I totally understand your frustrations, but I think
it's great that you keep rolling.  So many people give
up lit circles due to these situations.
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Re: [MOSAIC] literature circles (Maryanne)

2008-02-09 Thread Ltandy1211
Dear Readers,

My third grade class is struggling with book clubs this year. I purposely set 
out to model, model, model what is expected of a book club member.  We read a 
book in  a whole-group setting and practiced the four roles so that every 
table group had a chance to experience each role. The roles are: Word Wizard, 
Summarizer,  Big Idea Sketcher, Question Master, and Character Monitor. We even 
did a few "fish bowl" discussions where I sat in to model how a conversation 
works. while the rest of the class sat in a circle around us and observed.  I 
thought we were ready.  Now that they are half way through the books, I see 
that 
perhaps even more modeling was needed. 

I stressed how important it was to come to the group prepared and how it was 
their responsibility to get the reading done on time.  I felt that I gave them 
plenty of time to do the reading and prepare for their jobshowever, as I 
circulate from group to group during the discussin time, I notice that a good 
third of the class is not prepared.  They either haven't finished the reading 
or their job is only half completed.  During the discussion time they get so 
loud that no one can hear themselves talk.   Again, I've modeled and we have 
role-played and brainstormedwhat have I done wrong?  

Thanks for any feedback you might have to offer.

Laurie Tandy
Third Grade
California




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