Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Hi, Thanks for this revision which is practically perfect. Sadly, the RFC Editor requires that the first section of a document is the Introduction. I think it would be fine to swap your sections 1 and 2. You asked me at the end of February to have a look at your proposed Security text, and I have done now. I think you have gone a long way towards doing the right thing, and I'm comfortable with the idea of putting this in front of the Security experts. You need to post a quick update to swap the first two sections. While you do that I'll write the Shepherd Write-up. Then we will ask the AD to advance it. Thanks, Adrian -Original Message- From: Dhruv Dhody Sent: 07 March 2019 09:36 To: adr...@olddog.co.uk; pce@ietf.org Cc: Dhruv Dhody Subject: RE: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi Adrian, WG, We have posted a new version -09 that addresses WG LC comments (from Adrian and Dan). I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn/ Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-09 Please have a look and let us know if any further changes needs to be made. Thanks! Dhruv, Young & Daniele -- Dhruv Dhody Lead Architect Network Business Line Huawei Technologies India Pvt. Ltd. Survey No. 37, Next to EPIP Area, Kundalahalli, Whitefield Bengaluru, Karnataka - 560066 Tel: + 91-80-49160700 Ext 71583 II Email: dhruv.dh...@huawei.com This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from HUAWEI, which is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any use of the information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total or partial disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the intended recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender by phone or email immediately and delete it! > -Original Message- > From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 25 February 2019 18:24 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability- > actn > > Hi, > > The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few > comments of support. > > There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). > > Authors: > Please post a revision that addresses the comments. > > Working Group: > Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this > draft really should be advanced. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > -Original Message- > From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn > > Hi WG, > > draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards > publication. > > This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd > February). > > During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. > If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read > the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and > propose solutions. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > ___ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce > > ___ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Yes/support Cheers, Jeff > On Mar 7, 2019, at 1:35 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: > > Hi Adrian, WG, > > We have posted a new version -09 that addresses WG LC comments (from Adrian > and Dan). > > I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn/ > Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-09 > > Please have a look and let us know if any further changes needs to be made. > > Thanks! > Dhruv, Young & Daniele > > -- > Dhruv Dhody > Lead Architect > Network Business Line > Huawei Technologies India Pvt. Ltd. > Survey No. 37, Next to EPIP Area, Kundalahalli, Whitefield > Bengaluru, Karnataka - 560066 > Tel: + 91-80-49160700 Ext 71583 II Email: dhruv.dh...@huawei.com > > This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from HUAWEI, > which > is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any > use of the > information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total > or partial > disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the > intended > recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please > notify the sender by > phone or email immediately and delete it! > > >> -Original Message- >> From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel >> Sent: 25 February 2019 18:24 >> To: pce@ietf.org >> Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability- >> actn >> >> Hi, >> >> The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few >> comments of support. >> >> There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). >> >> Authors: >> Please post a revision that addresses the comments. >> >> Working Group: >> Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this >> draft really should be advanced. >> >> Thanks, >> Adrian >> >> -Original Message- >> From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel >> Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 >> To: pce@ietf.org >> Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn >> >> Hi WG, >> >> draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards >> publication. >> >> This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd >> February). >> >> During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. >> If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read >> the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and >> propose solutions. >> >> Thanks, >> Adrian >> >> ___ >> Pce mailing list >> Pce@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce >> >> ___ >> Pce mailing list >> Pce@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce > > ___ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Hi Adrian, WG, We have posted a new version -09 that addresses WG LC comments (from Adrian and Dan). I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn/ Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-09 Please have a look and let us know if any further changes needs to be made. Thanks! Dhruv, Young & Daniele -- Dhruv Dhody Lead Architect Network Business Line Huawei Technologies India Pvt. Ltd. Survey No. 37, Next to EPIP Area, Kundalahalli, Whitefield Bengaluru, Karnataka - 560066 Tel: + 91-80-49160700 Ext 71583 II Email: dhruv.dh...@huawei.com This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from HUAWEI, which is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any use of the information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total or partial disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the intended recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender by phone or email immediately and delete it! > -Original Message- > From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 25 February 2019 18:24 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability- > actn > > Hi, > > The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few > comments of support. > > There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). > > Authors: > Please post a revision that addresses the comments. > > Working Group: > Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this > draft really should be advanced. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > -Original Message- > From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 > To: pce@ietf.org > Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn > > Hi WG, > > draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards > publication. > > This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd > February). > > During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. > If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read > the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and > propose solutions. > > Thanks, > Adrian > > ___ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce > > ___ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Dear Adrian and WG, I have reviewed the draft. I support the publication. Best regards, Bin 보낸 사람 : "Adrian Farrel" 보낸 날짜 : 2019-02-25 21:55:15 ( +09:00 ) 받는 사람 : pce@ietf.org 참조 : 제목 : [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi, The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few comments of support. There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). Authors: Please post a revision that addresses the comments. Working Group: Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this draft really should be advanced. Thanks, Adrian -Original Message- From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi WG, draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards publication. This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd February). During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and propose solutions. Thanks, Adrian ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Hi Adrian and WG, I reviewed this draft, and believed that it is ready to move to the next stage. Thanks. Amy -Original Message- From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: Monday, February 25, 2019 6:54 AM To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi, The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few comments of support. There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). Authors: Please post a revision that addresses the comments. Working Group: Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this draft really should be advanced. Thanks, Adrian -Original Message- From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi WG, draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards publication. This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd February). During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and propose solutions. Thanks, Adrian ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Dear Adrian, I have reviewed this draft and imho it can be moved to the next stage. This reference can be added to the draft as informative: Experimental Validation of the ACTN architecture for flexi-grid optical networks using Active Stateful Hierarchical PCEs, R Casellas, R Vilalta, R Martínez, R Muñoz, H Zheng, Y Lee, 19th International Conference on Transparent Optical Networks (ICTON), 1-4, 2017. Thanks, Ricard On 25/02/2019 13:54, Adrian Farrel wrote: Hi, The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few comments of support. There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). Authors: Please post a revision that addresses the comments. Working Group: Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this draft really should be advanced. Thanks, Adrian -Original Message- From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi WG, draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards publication. This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd February). During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and propose solutions. Thanks, Adrian ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
Re: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn
Dear WG Members, I reviewed this draft and believe it is ready to move to the next stage. Thanks, Peter == Dr. / Director Peter(Choongul) Park Biz Total Solution(BTS) Proj., KT Infra Lab. 34046 70 Yuseong-daero 1689beon-gil Yuseong-gu Daejeon Korea(South) T: +82.10.2879.7463 / F: +82.42.870.8779 -Original Message- From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: Monday, February 25, 2019 6:54 AM To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call completed for draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi, The WG last call completed without any dissent, but with only a few comments of support. There were some issues raised (including from Dan and me). Authors: Please post a revision that addresses the comments. Working Group: Please continue to send messages of support so that we know that this draft really should be advanced. Thanks, Adrian -Original Message- From: Pce On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel Sent: 08 February 2019 11:34 To: pce@ietf.org Subject: [Pce] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn Hi WG, draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn seems to be ready to progress towards publication. This email starts a two week working group last call (ends on 23rd February). During this time, please read the draft and make comments for improvement. If you then support its publication please let us know that you have read the draft and support it. If you have any concerns, please let us know and propose solutions. Thanks, Adrian ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce 이 메일은 지정된 수취인만을 위해 작성되었으며, 중요한 정보나 저작권을 포함하고 있을 수 있습니다. 어떠한 권한 없이, 본 문서에 포함된 정보의 전부 또는 일부를 무단으로 제3자에게 공개, 배포, 복사 또는 사용하는 것을 엄격히 금지합니다. 만약, 본 메일이 잘못 전송된 경우, 발신인 또는 당사에 알려주시고, 본 메일을 즉시 삭제하여 주시기 바랍니다. This E-mail may contain confidential information and/or copyright material. This email is intended for the use of the addressee only. If you receive this email by mistake, please either delete it without reproducing, distributing or retaining copies thereof or notify the sender immediately. ___ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
