Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-30 Thread Paul Sorenson

Try Komposer

http://kompozer.net/

It's pretty easy to use and offers WYSIWYG as well as a source screen.

-p



Bob W wrote:

[...]

For Bob W, re the index page. I thought i found all the spelling
mistakes, but i guess not.;-) The page it self is from a web tutorial
offered by my ISP, which i did a simple page, then cut pasted and
hacked my way into the way it is now.
I have a book on coding, but its all greek to me so this was the best
i could get on my own.
I asked Mark last year if any of his students wanted to have a go at
it, for the extra credit he was offering, and not suprisingly, no one
offered.

I'll go in and try and fix up what i can from the suggestions.



Unless you have ideas of becoming a professional it's probably not worth the
struggle to try and learn to code it by hand. You might be better off trying
out various freeware wysiwyg web page editors which you can use to manage
the layout quite easily, including canned templates which will help you to
develop a simple, professional look. 


You could try SeaMonkey, for example, which includea a wysiwyg html editor.
I haven't tried it myself, so don't take this as  a recommendation, but it
seems to have a reasonable pedigree so I imagine it would do a pretty decent
job. Actually, I just downloaded and tried it. Here is an example of
state-of-the-art web design that I knocked together in a couple of minutes:
http://www.web-options.com/PRL.html

I reckon with a couple of hours playing around you could put something
pretty decent together.

There are a few books around, which your library should be able to find for
you, which help with page design. Two that I've found useful are Web Style
Guide by Lynch and Horton, and Designing Visual Interfaces by Mullet and
Sano.

If you do decide to hand-code it I would recommend that you learn about and
use CSS. A very good book about it is Cascading Style Sheets by Lie and Bos.

Bob


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RE: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-30 Thread Bob W
[...]
> For Bob W, re the index page. I thought i found all the spelling
> mistakes, but i guess not.;-) The page it self is from a web tutorial
> offered by my ISP, which i did a simple page, then cut pasted and
> hacked my way into the way it is now.
> I have a book on coding, but its all greek to me so this was the best
> i could get on my own.
> I asked Mark last year if any of his students wanted to have a go at
> it, for the extra credit he was offering, and not suprisingly, no one
> offered.
> 
> I'll go in and try and fix up what i can from the suggestions.
> 

Unless you have ideas of becoming a professional it's probably not worth the
struggle to try and learn to code it by hand. You might be better off trying
out various freeware wysiwyg web page editors which you can use to manage
the layout quite easily, including canned templates which will help you to
develop a simple, professional look. 

You could try SeaMonkey, for example, which includea a wysiwyg html editor.
I haven't tried it myself, so don't take this as  a recommendation, but it
seems to have a reasonable pedigree so I imagine it would do a pretty decent
job. Actually, I just downloaded and tried it. Here is an example of
state-of-the-art web design that I knocked together in a couple of minutes:
http://www.web-options.com/PRL.html

I reckon with a couple of hours playing around you could put something
pretty decent together.

There are a few books around, which your library should be able to find for
you, which help with page design. Two that I've found useful are Web Style
Guide by Lynch and Horton, and Designing Visual Interfaces by Mullet and
Sano.

If you do decide to hand-code it I would recommend that you learn about and
use CSS. A very good book about it is Cascading Style Sheets by Lie and Bos.

Bob


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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-30 Thread Doug Franklin

David J Brooks wrote:


Now i just need to figure out how to centre it on the page. Any code ideas.??



http://www.caughtinmotion.com";>


for old style, pure HTML3

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-30 Thread Rob Studdert
On 5/30/09, David J Brooks  wrote:
> Ok, here is the updated version, with several suggestions worked on.
>
> I finally figured out what buttons to turn off in PS to allow a re
> size of the two shots that were off a bit.
>
> I redid the text.
>
> I re sized the gif to 100k, and proper LxW so the photos are not squished.
>
> Now i just need to figure out how to centre it on the page. Any code
> ideas.??

Not ideal but will work:



BTW you don't really need to specify the width or height, without
these tags the image will naturally be displayed 1:1. Also I haven't
been involved with the thread to this point but an image containing
full colour photogrphs is probably better off displayed as a JPG, so
long as the compression rate is not too high the text will look fine,
110k is still fairly large for this application, you could probably
get it down to 67k as a JPG.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-30 Thread David J Brooks
Ok, here is the updated version, with several suggestions worked on.

I finally figured out what buttons to turn off in PS to allow a re
size of the two shots that were off a bit.

I redid the text.

I re sized the gif to 100k, and proper LxW so the photos are not squished.

Now i just need to figure out how to centre it on the page. Any code ideas.??

http://www.caughtinmotion.com/

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread David J Brooks
On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 12:38 PM, frank theriault
 wrote:
> On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 11:46 AM, Daniel J. Matyola
>  wrote:
>> That's a bit much for my taste.
>
> I was joking.
>
> Mark posted that url a month or two ago, telling us that he shows his
> students that site as an example of ~bad~ website design...

He must have stopped using mine then

Dave
>
> ;-)
>
> cheers,
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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread frank theriault
On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 11:46 AM, Daniel J. Matyola
 wrote:
> That's a bit much for my taste.

I was joking.

Mark posted that url a month or two ago, telling us that he shows his
students that site as an example of ~bad~ website design...

;-)

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
That's a bit much for my taste.

Dan

On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 10:08 AM, frank theriault
 wrote:
> On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 9:49 AM, David J Brooks  wrote:
> 
>> I'll go in and try and fix up what i can from the suggestions.
>
> I think if you pattern yours after this one, you can't fail:
>
> http://www.photographertoronto.com/
>
> cheers,
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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread Cotty
On 29/5/09, mike wilson, discombobulated, unleashed:

>
>Can you just say it to him and not bother the rest of us?

No there yet bubba - still waitin on the duffle full of camping gear.
And my tripod, WAA.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread frank theriault
On Fri, May 29, 2009 at 9:49 AM, David J Brooks  wrote:

> I'll go in and try and fix up what i can from the suggestions.

I think if you pattern yours after this one, you can't fail:

http://www.photographertoronto.com/

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread David J Brooks
Thanks to every one who commented, and John C for his detailed comments.

As far as the use of the word logo, I suppose that was a bad choice of
word, but I think we all know what i meant. After all it is me
talking.:-)

I tried to get all the photos to look the same size but the files are
a bit different and there are two shots that i wanted to use, but
could not get them the same size as the cat, autumn etc.
I'd like the cat to stay as i am open for cat/dog portrait stuff if
required. I noticed after, that it is sized at my old mast head size,
so i think thats a problem in it self. I forgot to resize the file to
a smaller version.
My bad.


For Bob W, re the index page. I thought i found all the spelling
mistakes, but i guess not.;-) The page it self is from a web tutorial
offered by my ISP, which i did a simple page, then cut pasted and
hacked my way into the way it is now.
I have a book on coding, but its all greek to me so this was the best
i could get on my own.
I asked Mark last year if any of his students wanted to have a go at
it, for the extra credit he was offering, and not suprisingly, no one
offered.

I'll go in and try and fix up what i can from the suggestions.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread mike wilson

 Cotty  wrote: 
> On 29/5/09, Anthony Farr, discombobulated, unleashed:
> 
> > everyone with both a
> >camera and a cat eventually puts a cat-picture on the web.
> 
> Mark!

Can you just say it to him and not bother the rest of us?

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread AlunFoto
2009/5/29 Malcolm Smith :
> I think Cesar may reach a different conclusion, especially if the camera in
> question is an LX.

"Everyone with an LX and a snake will eventually dress the former with
the latter"?

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RE: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread Malcolm Smith
Anthony Farr wrote:
 
> everyone with both a camera and a cat eventually puts a cat-picture on the
web.

I think Cesar may reach a different conclusion, especially if the camera in
question is an LX.

Malcolm


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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-29 Thread Cotty
On 29/5/09, Anthony Farr, discombobulated, unleashed:

> everyone with both a
>camera and a cat eventually puts a cat-picture on the web.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
Wow.  I for one learned a lot from John's discussion of the logo.

Dan

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:17 PM, John Celio  wrote:
>> Thanks to all that offered suggestions for my new logo.
>>
>> Here it is on the site.:
>>
>> http://www.caughtinmotion.com/
>
> I hadn't read much of this thread till just now, so I expect I will be
> repeating a few things that others have noted.  That said, I have a lot of
> comments.  I am a designer and thus a pretentious know-it-all, so feel free
> to ignore any of the following.
>
> First thing's first: 411kb for a logo is WAY too big for a simple website.
> It took a long time to download even on my broadband connection.  No casual
> visitor is going to care enough to wait for it to load.  I just noticed that
> you're using a GIF that is 1463x640 pixels and manually resizing it via
> HTML.  Bad idea!  Take your original image, shrink it to the desired size
> and save a compressed JPG instead.  The file size will be a lot smaller and
> viewers won't know the difference, guaranteed.
>
> Regarding the images, there are two things that really must be changed to
> make your logo pleasing to the eye: make all the photos the same dimensions
> and position them in a way that has better symmetry.  Right now the images
> look chaotic, like they were thrown together haphazardly.  The first thing
> I'd do is crop all the photos to the same aspect ratio and size.  The
> resulting equal spaces between photos will help the viewer's eye move among
> them more easily than varied spaces.  You may have to make some small
> sacrifices to achieve this, but remember that this is only your logo, not
> the actual photos.  Your viewer won't notice or care if they're slightly
> different from the large versions.  Next, move the cat to the top right to
> echo the horse on the left.  Replace either the flower or the three horses
> with a black & white photo and put it where the cat used to be, OR lose one
> of the current building photos and replace it with a color photo that echos
> the flower or horses.  I realize there is color in the top left building
> photo, but it looks black & white at this size and this makes the center of
> your logo very grey.  This is not really a good thing, as a logo that is
> weak in the middle is a weak logo in general.
>
> I'd suggest using upper and lower case letters in your logo text, rather
> than all caps.  All caps is more aggressive than I think you want to be,
> and, for instance, "www.CaughtInMotion.com" is much easier to read and
> remember than the all caps version.  Try it and see what you think.
>
> Lastly, you could make the logo much more versatile if you make it using
> HTML, tables and small thumbnail images.  If you make a table that is
> 800x300 (the size you have the logo scaled to on your page), you could
> easily manipulate the contents to look almost exactly like what you have in
> your current gif.  Better yet, you can make it easy to change the images as
> you see fit by putting individual thumbnails in each cell.  This would allow
> you to change photos as you take additional noteworthy shots in the future.
> You can also easily add to or reduce the number of thumbnails.  Finally,
> assuming you're using small, compressed JPG thumbnails, you can make your
> logo load VERY quickly using the table method.
>
> I hope this helps,
> John
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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread John Celio

Thanks to all that offered suggestions for my new logo.

Here it is on the site.:

http://www.caughtinmotion.com/


I hadn't read much of this thread till just now, so I expect I will be 
repeating a few things that others have noted.  That said, I have a lot of 
comments.  I am a designer and thus a pretentious know-it-all, so feel free 
to ignore any of the following.


First thing's first: 411kb for a logo is WAY too big for a simple website. 
It took a long time to download even on my broadband connection.  No casual 
visitor is going to care enough to wait for it to load.  I just noticed that 
you're using a GIF that is 1463x640 pixels and manually resizing it via 
HTML.  Bad idea!  Take your original image, shrink it to the desired size 
and save a compressed JPG instead.  The file size will be a lot smaller and 
viewers won't know the difference, guaranteed.


Regarding the images, there are two things that really must be changed to 
make your logo pleasing to the eye: make all the photos the same dimensions 
and position them in a way that has better symmetry.  Right now the images 
look chaotic, like they were thrown together haphazardly.  The first thing 
I'd do is crop all the photos to the same aspect ratio and size.  The 
resulting equal spaces between photos will help the viewer's eye move among 
them more easily than varied spaces.  You may have to make some small 
sacrifices to achieve this, but remember that this is only your logo, not 
the actual photos.  Your viewer won't notice or care if they're slightly 
different from the large versions.  Next, move the cat to the top right to 
echo the horse on the left.  Replace either the flower or the three horses 
with a black & white photo and put it where the cat used to be, OR lose one 
of the current building photos and replace it with a color photo that echos 
the flower or horses.  I realize there is color in the top left building 
photo, but it looks black & white at this size and this makes the center of 
your logo very grey.  This is not really a good thing, as a logo that is 
weak in the middle is a weak logo in general.


I'd suggest using upper and lower case letters in your logo text, rather 
than all caps.  All caps is more aggressive than I think you want to be, 
and, for instance, "www.CaughtInMotion.com" is much easier to read and 
remember than the all caps version.  Try it and see what you think.


Lastly, you could make the logo much more versatile if you make it using 
HTML, tables and small thumbnail images.  If you make a table that is 
800x300 (the size you have the logo scaled to on your page), you could 
easily manipulate the contents to look almost exactly like what you have in 
your current gif.  Better yet, you can make it easy to change the images as 
you see fit by putting individual thumbnails in each cell.  This would allow 
you to change photos as you take additional noteworthy shots in the future. 
You can also easily add to or reduce the number of thumbnails.  Finally, 
assuming you're using small, compressed JPG thumbnails, you can make your 
logo load VERY quickly using the table method.


I hope this helps,
John

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Feroze
I would make all the pics the same size so the black borders are equal 
and the 2 top center ones look desaturated so I'd do the same to the cat 
pic so its 2 colour 4 grey and 2 colour...you can get some really nice 
templates here : http://www.freecsstemplates.org/...add some meta tags 
and you pretty much on your way


David J Brooks wrote:

Thanks to all that offered suggestions for my new logo.

Here it is on the site.:

http://www.caughtinmotion.com/

I think it looks pretty nice.

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:24 PM, frank theriault
 wrote:
  

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:


Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/
  

That looks really nice, Dave.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Anthony Farr
I'm with Doug in thinking that this is a good masthead but is too much
for a logo.  A logo doesn't even need to be one of your photos.

Until I looked I had been worried about directional integrity, so many
groupings like this are spoilt by higgledy-piggledy flows of movement
within individual pictures that conflict with the overall layout.  If
your homepage version is more recent than your flickr version (I'm
backtracking from Pauls suggestion), then all you need do is flip-flop
the flower at top-right so that you have a directional consistency
from the centre outwards.

As a matter of personal taste I'd be inclined to lose the cat, not
because I'm a cat hater (I like them) but because everyone with both a
camera and a cat eventually puts a cat-picture on the web.  They are a
cliche of the age, and say nothing about your professional capability.
 Put catpix in the body of your website by all means, but not on the
masthead or logo.

If you plan to do pet portraiture as a business then disregard the
preceding rant :-)

regards, Anthony

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to those who lack in mind and sight"
   (Anon)



2009/5/29 Doug Franklin :
> David J Brooks wrote:
>>
>> Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.
>>
>> Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.
>>
>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/
>
> Personally, I'm thinking this is more of a mission statement than a logo.
> :-)  If it were me, I'd look for something more compact to use for a logo
> and use this image as more like a masthead or something.
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RE: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Bob W
> 
> Thanks to all that offered suggestions for my new logo.
> 
> Here it is on the site.:
> 
> http://www.caughtinmotion.com/
> 
> I think it looks pretty nice.
> 
> Dave
> 

The logo looks fine, Dave, but unless there's something I'm missing you have
quite a lot more work to do on the rest of the site. I looked at it in
Chrome, Opera and IE8 and it doesn't seem to have much in the way of page
layout design - is this intentional, or am I missing some sort of plug-in?
There are also quite a few spelling and grammar errors in the text.

Regards
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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Doug Franklin

David J Brooks wrote:

Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/


Personally, I'm thinking this is more of a mission statement than a 
logo. :-)  If it were me, I'd look for something more compact to use for 
a logo and use this image as more like a masthead or something.


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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Doug Franklin

frank theriault wrote:


I agree with Bong about the same size boxes (that would be nice), but
I'm obviously not as anal as him, because I don't advocate alternating
B&W and colour...


I'd like all of the photos in one row to be the same height, but I don't 
mind their horizontal edges not lining up.


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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Doug Franklin

David J Brooks wrote:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/


It's OK, but the text gets lost in that presentation.  If you're going 
to do it that way (with the text kinda "dangling" from the bottom of the 
grid of photos) you may need to put some sort of border around it. 
Personally, I'd overlay the text on the photos.


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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Luiz Felipe

David, I like this version. Did like the previous too... Looking good to me.

LF

David J Brooks escreveu:

Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM,   wrote:

So far I got it will go for a website header.

IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the website's
viewer has to scroll down way too much.

My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com too
small caps or both all caps.

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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Ken Waller

I agree, the borders around the images are too big.

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From: "Joseph McAllister" 

Subject: Re: OT New logo, try #2


By the time I got a look, you had uploaded the revised edition as  
well, which I liked. I'm no expert, but if the border and the dividers  
could be scaled down a bit, they wouldn't overpower the images as they  
seem to do now. Smaller text too. You're showing the photos, not the  
name, at least online. On a business card, what you have would work  
and be very readable.



On May 28, 2009, at 07:59 , David J Brooks wrote:


http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/

Simple logo for a VERY simple site.

Comments welcome.


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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Ken Waller

I agree, the images sizes should be the same. Looks haphazard as is.

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Subject: Re: OT New logo, try #2



The idea and the actual photos used are okay but I would like to see
the boxes the same sizes (...just my obsessive compulsive thing...)
and alternating the BW & color photos...

Bong :-)

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/

Simple logo for a VERY simple site.

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
Thanks to all that offered suggestions for my new logo.

Here it is on the site.:

http://www.caughtinmotion.com/

I think it looks pretty nice.

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:24 PM, frank theriault
 wrote:
> On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:
>> Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.
>>
>> Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.
>>
>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/
>
> That looks really nice, Dave.
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> cheers,
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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Joseph McAllister
By the time I got a look, you had uploaded the revised edition as  
well, which I liked. I'm no expert, but if the border and the dividers  
could be scaled down a bit, they wouldn't overpower the images as they  
seem to do now. Smaller text too. You're showing the photos, not the  
name, at least online. On a business card, what you have would work  
and be very readable.



On May 28, 2009, at 07:59 , David J Brooks wrote:


http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/

Simple logo for a VERY simple site.

Comments welcome.


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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread frank theriault
On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:
> Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.
>
> Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/

That looks really nice, Dave.

cheers,
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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Paul Stenquist
That would be swap positions between the cat and the church pic that's  
next to the cat. Keep the cat in the lower row but move him one to the  
right.

Paul
On May 28, 2009, at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks wrote:


Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM,   wrote:

So far I got it will go for a website header.

IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the  
website's

viewer has to scroll down way too much.

My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com  
too

small caps or both all caps.

Peter

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Paul Stenquist
I think you should swap positions between the cat and the church. Then  
you've go it. Very nice.

Paul
On May 28, 2009, at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks wrote:


Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM,   wrote:

So far I got it will go for a website header.

IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the  
website's

viewer has to scroll down way too much.

My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com  
too

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Peter

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Re: Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
I like this one better.  I think it quite effective.

Dan

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 2:01 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:
> Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.
>
> Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/
>
> Dave
>
> On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM,   wrote:
>> So far I got it will go for a website header.
>>
>> IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the website's
>> viewer has to scroll down way too much.
>>
>> My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com too
>> small caps or both all caps.
>>
>> Peter
>>
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Logo 3 was OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
Hopefully it will be smaller when on the site.

Here is try number 3, i';m getting close.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573147749/

Dave

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM,   wrote:
> So far I got it will go for a website header.
>
> IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the website's
> viewer has to scroll down way too much.
>
> My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com too
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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread timber
So far I got it will go for a website header.

IMHO it is too 'high' for that. It takes too much space and the website's
viewer has to scroll down way too much.

My other suggestion is if you write www small caps then write .com too
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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 1:11 PM, Paul Stenquist  wrote:
> I agree. It's a nice logo, but uniformity will help here.
> Paul

Thanks Paul.

Back to CS1 for some adjustments.

Dave
> On May 28, 2009, at 11:33 AM, Bong Manayon wrote:
>
>> The idea and the actual photos used are okay but I would like to see
>> the boxes the same sizes (...just my obsessive compulsive thing...)
>> and alternating the BW & color photos...
>>
>> Bong :-)
>>
>> On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:59 PM, David J Brooks 
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>>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/
>>>
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>>>
>>> Comments welcome.
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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Paul Stenquist

I agree. It's a nice logo, but uniformity will help here.
Paul
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The idea and the actual photos used are okay but I would like to see
the boxes the same sizes (...just my obsessive compulsive thing...)
and alternating the BW & color photos...

Bong :-)

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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 12:44 PM, frank theriault
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> On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:59 AM, David J Brooks  wrote:
>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/
>>
>> Simple logo for a VERY simple site.
>>
>> Comments welcome.
>
> I agree with Bong about the same size boxes (that would be nice), but
> I'm obviously not as anal as him, because I don't advocate alternating
> B&W and colour...
>
> Looks nice, Dave!

Thanks.

I'll play a bit with the boxes. They are hand scaled but i thought i
had them close, but i guess not.:-0

Dave

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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
Thanks. I think i should make the boxes the same size, and may be move
at least one B&W. They do seem a bit bunched.

Dave

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> The idea and the actual photos used are okay but I would like to see
> the boxes the same sizes (...just my obsessive compulsive thing...)
> and alternating the BW & color photos...
>
> Bong :-)
>
> On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:59 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:
>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/
>>
>> Simple logo for a VERY simple site.
>>
>> Comments welcome.
>>
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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread frank theriault
On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:59 AM, David J Brooks  wrote:
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/
>
> Simple logo for a VERY simple site.
>
> Comments welcome.

I agree with Bong about the same size boxes (that would be nice), but
I'm obviously not as anal as him, because I don't advocate alternating
B&W and colour...

Looks nice, Dave!

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Re: OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread Bong Manayon
The idea and the actual photos used are okay but I would like to see
the boxes the same sizes (...just my obsessive compulsive thing...)
and alternating the BW & color photos...

Bong :-)

On Thu, May 28, 2009 at 10:59 PM, David J Brooks  wrote:
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/
>
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>
> Comments welcome.
>
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OT New logo, try #2

2009-05-28 Thread David J Brooks
http://www.flickr.com/photos/djbrooks/3573534830/

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