Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

Hi Theresa, On Fri, Mar 04, 2022 at 06:42:07PM -0800, Theresa Enghardt wrote: > Dear Cigdem, > > Thank you for preparing the revised version, it looks pretty good to me. > > Some replies inline: > > On 3/4/22 14:23, Cigdem Sengul wrote: > > > > > > Section 1.3: > > > > "Will > >    

Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

Dear Cigdem, Thank you for preparing the revised version, it looks pretty good to me. Some replies inline: On 3/4/22 14:23, Cigdem Sengul wrote: Section 1.3: "Will                    If the network connection is not closed normally, […]" I suggest to make this a bit

Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-aif-06.txt

This is a small update addressing editorial comments in the Artart review (thank you, Marco!) and from the designated expert for the Content-Format registry (thank you, Klaus!). Doing this in the middle of IESG evaluation is slightly weird, but might still be in time for the IESG telechat on

[Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-aif-06.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments WG of the IETF. Title : An Authorization Information Format (AIF) for ACE Author :

Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

Dear Theresa, Thank you very much for the comments. I have prepared a revised version, where the changes can be found in the following pull request: https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/99 If you are happy with these changes, I can submit a new ID. I also explain the changes below,

Re: [Ace] WGLC draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize

Hi Marco, thanks again for the quick response. I will add your suggested change and submit a new version. Grüße Olaf On 2022-03-04, Marco Tiloca wrote: > Hi Olaf, > > On 2022-03-04 13:04, Olaf Bergmann wrote: >> Hi Marco, >> >> On 2022-03-03, Marco Tiloca wrote: >> >>> Thanks! It looks good

Re: [Ace] WGLC draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize

Hi Olaf, On 2022-03-04 13:04, Olaf Bergmann wrote: Hi Marco, On 2022-03-03, Marco Tiloca wrote: Thanks! It looks good overall, please see below some suggestions. Thanks. I have merged the changes into the main branch together with the changes proposed in this email (see Editor's copy [2]).

Re: [Ace] WGLC draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize

Hi Marco, On 2022-03-03, Marco Tiloca wrote: > Thanks! It looks good overall, please see below some suggestions. Thanks. I have merged the changes into the main branch together with the changes proposed in this email (see Editor's copy [2]). More comments inline. [2]