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I have no reason to change my review (of the -15 version) summary
from Ready to something else. BTW I maintain my *minor* editorial concerns
in 4.1 page 7 (spurious minimum words) and 4.2.2 page 10 (e.g. without
the mandatory ',').
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Hi Francis,
Thanks for your review.
--On December 5, 2008 10:50:24 AM +0100 Francis Dupont
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I have no reason to change my review (of the -15 version) summary
from Ready to something else. BTW I maintain my *minor* editorial concerns
in 4.1 page 7 (spurious minimum
Francis,
Thanks for the review. Proposed resolutions for comments are inline.
spt
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