[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc2853bis-05.txt

2009-06-02 Thread Gonzalo Camarillo
Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Draf

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc2853bis-05.txt

2009-06-02 Thread Mayank Upadhyay
[Really CC'ing her this time. Sorry.] On Tue, Jun 2, 2009 at 10:32 AM, Mayank Upadhyay wrote: > FYI, Seema no longer has the email address seema.malk...@sun.com > . I'm CC'ing her on an alternate email address: seema.malk...@gmail.com. > Also, we've received feedback about four specific nits fro

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-mps-02

2009-06-02 Thread McCann Peter-A001034
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871-errata-05

2009-06-02 Thread McCann Peter-A001034
The -05 version did not address my one technical comment in Section 11: AUID in the i= flag must always have an '@' sign according to the ABNF in section 10. The example AUIDs given ("sub.example.com" and "sub1.sub2.example.com") are missing this. Technically, I guess you should say "the domain

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc2853bis-05.txt

2009-06-02 Thread Shawn M Emery
Mayank Upadhyay wrote: [Really CC'ing her this time. Sorry.] On Tue, Jun 2, 2009 at 10:32 AM, Mayank Upadhyay > wrote: FYI, Seema no longer has the email address seema.malk...@sun.com . I'm CC'ing her on an alternate email addres

Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for June 4, 2009 Telechat

2009-06-02 Thread Mary Barnes
I've uploaded the reviews received to date along with the updated spreadsheets. Please let me know if there are any errors or omissions. Thanks, Mary. _ From: Barnes, Mary (RICH2:AR00) Sent: Thursday, May 28, 2009 10:04 PM To: 'General Area