Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09.txt

2009-09-22 Thread Cyrus Daboo
Hi Vijay, Thank you for your review. --On September 16, 2009 4:52:40 PM -0500 "Vijay K. Gurbani" wrote: Nits: 1) Real pedantic nit, sorry. S6.1.4 is about eavesdropping and not data integrity, right? But the misuse suffered by a cleartext iCalendar object is given both treatments: la

Re: [Gen-art] Genart LC review : draft-ietf-roll-building-routing-reqs-05

2009-09-22 Thread Russ Housley
Did anyone do a Telechat review of this document? It is now at version -07. Russ At 01:38 PM 3/13/2009, Robert Sparks wrote: Apologies that this is late. I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.al

Re: [Gen-art] Genart LC review : draft-ietf-roll-building-routing-reqs-05

2009-09-22 Thread Mary Barnes
I re-assigned that document to Francis for the telechat: http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/reviewers-090924.html But, I've not yet seen a review. Mary. -Original Message- From: gen-art-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Russ Housley Sent: Tuesday, Se

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09.txt

2009-09-22 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
Cyrus Daboo wrote: Hi Vijay, Thank you for your review. Cyrus: No problem; sorry it was a couple days late. Would it suffice to keep the text as-is but change the title of that section to "Eavesdropping and Data Integrity"? Sure. 2) Acknowledgments: s/S.Silverberg/S. Silverberg/ Fixed

[Gen-art] GenArt Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pkix-other-certs-05

2009-09-22 Thread Ben Campbell
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-reqts-03

2009-09-22 Thread McCann Peter-A001034
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nfs

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sipcore-presence-scaling-requirements-02

2009-09-22 Thread Christian Vogt
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document..

Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for Sept 24, 2009 Telechat

2009-09-22 Thread Mary Barnes
Hi all, I have uploaded the reviews received to date along with the updated spreadsheet. Let me know if there are any errors or omissions. Thanks, Mary. > _ > From: Barnes, Mary (RICH2:AR00) > Sent: Thursday, September 17, 2009 7:44 PM > T