Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-10

2015-10-14 Thread Meral Shirazipour
Hi, Thank you Mohamed, I am ok with the clarifications and changes. Best, Meral > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > [mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com] > Sent: Tuesday, October 13, 2015 11:32 PM > To: Meral Shirazipour > Cc:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-lisp-impact-04

2015-10-14 Thread Russ Housley
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-impact-04 Reviewer: Russ

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-10

2015-10-14 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Miral, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com] > Envoyé : mardi 13 octobre 2015 18:31 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN > Cc : draft-ietf-pcp-port-set@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org > Objet : RE:

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-14 Thread Shah, Himanshu
Can you please re-send this. My entrust can not "decode" MIME format or something like that error. I only see blank (no text) email and no attachments.. Thanks, Himanshu From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailto:rdr...@cisco.com] Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2015 3:56 PM To: A. Jean Mahoney; General

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-14 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
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[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-14 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15

2015-10-14 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15 Reviewer: Vijay

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01

2015-10-14 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Dan! On this: > >When translating a packet between IPv4 and IPv6, an SIIT >implementation MUST individually translate each IP address it >encounters in the packet's IP headers (including any IP headers >contained within ICMP errors) according to Section

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15

2015-10-14 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Vijay. Good questions. Do the authors have an answer? Jari On 15 Oct 2015, at 00:49, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-mpls-self-ping-04

2015-10-14 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you Russ, thank you Ron. Jari On 29 Sep 2015, at 17:38, Ronald Bonica wrote: > Russ, > > Agree on both points. I have: > > - removed the word "unique" > - moved Section 6 to an appendix > > Thanks for the review. > > Ron > > >>

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10

2015-10-14 Thread Jari Arkko
(belated) thanks for the review and the fixes. the document is on tomorrow’s IESG telechat and i have balloted no-objection. jari On 04 Jun 2015, at 19:55, Hannes Gredler wrote: > alexey, > > thanks for your comments - have incorporated them - diff is here: >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08

2015-10-14 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you, both of you. Jari On 07 Oct 2015, at 21:26, Donald Eastlake wrote: > I believe the -10 version posted today resolves your comments. > > Thanks, > Donald > = > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-10

2015-10-14 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Meral, Thank you again for your review. FWIW, the changes you requested have been included in the new revision available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-11 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-11 Cheers, Med > -Message