Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls-12

Thanks, Jouni. Updated draft. -Tiru > -Original Message- > From: jouni.nospam [mailto:jouni.nos...@gmail.com] > Sent: Monday, November 28, 2016 11:12 PM > To: Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) > Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls@ietf.org > Subject: Re: gen-art review of dra

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-algs-16

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-adid-urn-01

Hi Jarrett, Thanks for your reply - follow-ups in line: On 29/11/2016 11:04, Jarrett Wold wrote: > Hi - > Thanks for the comments. Please see my responses. > > I used the EIDR draft as a template > (https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-pal-eidr-urn-00.txt). Ad-ID is similar, > but for advertisements

Re: [Gen-art] Complete Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-adid-urn-01

Hi - Thanks for the comments. Please see my responses. I used the EIDR draft as a template (https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-pal-eidr-urn-00.txt). Ad-ID is similar, but for advertisements where as EDIR is for program content. Major Issues: - This is an informative document that st

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-freshness-07

Minimum length is a problematic topic due to the fact that we intentionally did not specify the format of the freshness token. Since the structure of the freshness token is left up to the KDC, there is no good way to determine a minimum size. If the freshness token is a nonce then the size is

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-03

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-taps-transports-11

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[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-6lo-dect-ule-08

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[Gen-art] Complete Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04

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Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls-12

Hi, Sorry for being under the radar. See my comments below. > On Nov 18, 2016, at 8:40 AM, Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) > wrote: > >> -Original Message- >> From: jouni.nospam [mailto:jouni.nos...@gmail.com] >> Sent: Thursday, November 17, 2016 3:33 PM >> To: gen-art@ietf.org >> Cc: dr

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-behave-ipfix-nat-logging-11

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-freshness-07

The size issue a is big one for this late in the process as it never came up before. We would have to bring it up to the WG for discussion. Is this required? Happy to submit an updated version with the client & KDC flipped, first reference of KDC in abstract spelled out, and 2.1 PA_AS_FRESHNES

[Gen-art] Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-25

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[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07

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