Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-30 Thread Eliot Lear
Ok.  I'll push an update based on these changes in the next few days, barring additional comments. On 30.01.18 17:02, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > > > On Tue, Jan 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM, Alissa Cooper > wrote: > > > > On Jan 29, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Pete Resnick > mailto:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-07

2018-01-30 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-30 Thread Dan Romascanu
On Tue, Jan 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote: > > > On Jan 29, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Pete Resnick > wrote: > > > > > >> 8. Section 4: > >> > >> 'It is anticipated that > >> those roles will evolve. The IASA is responsible for keeping the > >> community informed in this regard, and MAY d

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-30 Thread Alissa Cooper
> On Jan 29, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: > > >> 8. Section 4: >> >> 'It is anticipated that >> those roles will evolve. The IASA is responsible for keeping the >> community informed in this regard, and MAY do so without updating >> this memo.' >> >> I would be a little concer

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-07

2018-01-30 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] [FORGED] Genart telechat review of draft-gutmann-scep-08

2018-01-30 Thread Peter Gutmann
>However, there are some issues (mostly editorial) that I would like the >authors to address. One comment on this, I didn't write the original text so I'll try and accommodate as much as possible, but in some cases I've had to guess at what the original authors intended. Also, the explanations fo