Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review result: Ready with Issues
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Dear Joel,
Thank you very much for your kind review.
> Nits/editorial comments:
>In section 2.2, in talking about "metric M", if I have understood properly,
>I think it would be clearer if you referred to "metric value M".
This section has been expanded with human-readable text and a ref
I do not consider this a show-stopper (I listed it as a nit /
editorial), but at least the -07 text does not look better in this regard.
In my experience, if this were indeed mathematics, one would talk about
a metric (how one measures) and a distance (the result of applying the
measure. E.g.
