Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-calext-extensions-03 (was: RE: Assignments for the 2016-06-30 Telechat)

2016-06-29 Thread Cyrus Daboo
(should it be marked as 'Updates RFC 5545'?). I did not see that addressed. It would be nice to get an answer, but I do not believe this is a show-stopper. A new -04 version of the draft has just been published with your review issues addresse

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review for draft-ietf-calext-extensions-03

2016-06-22 Thread Cyrus Daboo
and defines new properties and elements that bring into the standard extension elements added by vendors into their specification. Yes you are right, this does need to "Update" 5545. I will fix that. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-tzdist-service-08

2015-06-08 Thread Cyrus Daboo
r each update and will likely have to be removed by the RFC editor when they get to process it. Section 4.1.4 says: "If a client only needs data for only one, ..." There is an extra "only", please drop the first one. Fixed. Section

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-video-05

2015-06-05 Thread Cyrus Daboo
of the draft you reviewed. Anyway, thanks for your review and I will take a detailed look at it soon. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review: draft-ietf-calext-rscale-04

2015-03-03 Thread Cyrus Daboo
nds CalDAV [RFC4791] to specify how the extended "RRULE" property can be supported by CalDAV servers and clients. Would that be better? -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-daboo-webdav-sync-06

2012-01-02 Thread Cyrus Daboo
"real names" in examples, then I would be happy to change to follow that, but I am not aware of anything like that. Nit: idnits 2.12.12 reports that draft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav has been published as RFC 6352; the RFC Editor will correct this if a new version of the draft is not re

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-daboo-srv-caldav-08.txt

2010-09-08 Thread Cyrus Daboo
working copy. - Section 4, 2nd paragraph. Write ".well-known" within quotes to facilitate the reading of the text. Fixed there and other places for consistency. - Section 5 talks about the prohibition to servers to locate the actual service in the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review ofdraft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav-09.txt

2009-10-15 Thread Cyrus Daboo
Hi Brian, --On October 16, 2009 9:01:43 AM +1300 Brian E Carpenter wrote: I'm happy with the proposed changes, as far as my review goes. I agree with Marc, it seems correct to verify such changes in normative requirements with the WG. Email has been sent to the WG list. -- Cyrus

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review ofdraft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav-09.txt

2009-10-15 Thread Cyrus Daboo
are private, shared or public. Clients SHOULD provide an appropriate warning when changing access privileges for a private or shared address book with data so as to allow unauthenticated users access. Is that reasonable? -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review ofdraft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav-09.txt

2009-10-12 Thread Cyrus Daboo
appen only the first time they do an action, or each time? SHOULD seems a little strong when the nature of the warning is really going to be implementation dependent. That said, if there is consensus for this change, it may be necessary to explain a little more what "warn

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09.txt

2009-09-22 Thread Cyrus Daboo
;http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09#section-2.1.3>. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-webdav-mkcol-05

2009-08-18 Thread Cyrus Daboo
extended MKCOL - however, given the ever growing deployments of CalDAV that is probably not going to happen any time soon. So, I have changed the title to: "Using Extended MKCOL as an Alternative to MKxxx Methods" and changed "replace" to "alternative for" in a couple of places. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] about draft-daboo-imap-annotatemore-16.txt

2008-12-05 Thread Cyrus Daboo
s an RFC editor note to be corrected prior to publication. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] Re: Genart review: draft-ietf-imapext-annotate-16.txt

2006-11-16 Thread Cyrus Daboo
onfusion I ran into. Yes, that second paragraph can be removed. I'm not sure whether there ought to be a forward reference to the next section there though. -- Cyrus Daboo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art