[Gen-art] One sentence, RE: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-te-no-php-oob-mapping-08

2011-08-18 Thread Ross Callon
I dropped the ietf from the recipients for this email since this is too minor to bug everyone with the nit, but... The first sentence of section 3 is currently: Addition of "non-PHP behavior" adds a variable of attacks on the label assigned by the Egress node. Do we really intend to say:

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-pce-monitoring-04.txt

2009-05-28 Thread Ross Callon
Last call is over. Please respin (I see the most recent version dated January 2009). thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: JP Vasseur [mailto:jvass...@cisco.com] Sent: 28 April 2009 01:37 To: Ross Callon Cc: Francis Dupont; General Area Review Team; JP Vasseur; Jean-Louis Le Roux

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-pce-monitoring-04.txt

2009-04-24 Thread Ross Callon
You need to wait for the IETF last call to end before respinning. Once the IETF last call ends, then yes please respin. Thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: JP Vasseur [mailto:jvass...@cisco.com] Sent: 24 April 2009 02:05 To: Francis Dupont; Ross Callon Cc: General Area Review Team

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

2009-01-27 Thread Ross Callon
It seems pretty clear that the comment actually refers to the "Conventions used in this document" section. Ross -Original Message- From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] Sent: 27 January 2009 17:55 To: Ross Callon; Gonzalo Camarillo Cc: gen-art@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

2009-01-27 Thread Ross Callon
04:31 To: draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-r...@tools.ietf.org Cc: Ross Callon; gen-art@ietf.org; ccamp-cha...@tools.ietf.org Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Ge

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-dasgupta-ccamp-path-comp-analysis-02

2008-12-30 Thread Ross Callon
I added an RFC editor's note to cover these editorial points. Thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: Spencer Dawkins [mailto:spen...@wonderhamster.org] Sent: 25 November 2008 16:34 To: suk...@ece.drexel.edu; j...@ece.drexel.edu; j...@cisco.com Cc: General Area Review Team; Ross C

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-isis-wg-extlsp-03.txt

2008-11-11 Thread Ross Callon
enda soon after the IETF meeting. Thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: Danny McPherson [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: 11 November 2008 00:32 To: Brian E Carpenter; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) Cc: General Area Review Team; Ross Callon; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Re: Gen-A

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-manet-packetbb-15

2008-09-19 Thread Ross Callon
Thanks Elwyn! I have put in an RFC editor's note to correct the spelling of your name. ;-) thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: 19 September 2008 20:13 To: General Area Review Team Cc: Thomas Clausen; Christopher Dearlove; Cedric Adjih; [EM

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-manet-packetbb-14

2008-09-16 Thread Ross Callon
> Appendix A: Is this normative? If not should it use RFC 2119 language? > > Appendix B: Is this normative? If not should it use RFC 2119 language? > In particular... Elwyn; First of all, thanks for another very through and well-done review. I just have one comment with regard to the use

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-forces-mib-07

2008-09-02 Thread Ross Callon
front of the IESG. Thanks, Ross -Original Message- From: Spencer Dawkins [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: 01 September 2008 10:07 To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Cc: Ross Callon; General Area Review Team; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Patrick Droz; Jamal Hadi Salim Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-forces

Re: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05

2007-05-31 Thread Ross Callon
At 10:22 AM 5/31/2007 +0100, Adrian Farrel wrote: Maybe someone could clarify the progress of the IS-IS RFCs from Informational to Standards Track. It seems to me that this operation has been progressing for the longest time, and it is leaving everyone in a state of mild confusion about what

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-segment-recovery-03

2006-10-23 Thread Ross Callon
I think that I should enter an RFC editor's note to correct this. Ross At 06:05 PM 10/20/2006 -0400, Lou Berger wrote: Pasi, Good catch. Section 9.4., Secondary Record Route Object should have suggested 199. Lou At 04:55 AM 10/20/2006, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: I have been select

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-restart-ext-05

2006-10-04 Thread Ross Callon
I gather from reading through this exchange, and through the document, that an update will be needed before the document is put on the IESG agenda. I don't expect to have any additional comments, and thus suggest that you go ahead and update the draft to respond to the Gen-ART comments. Let me kn

[Gen-art] Re: FW: Gen ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-alarm-spec-03.txt

2006-08-09 Thread Ross Callon
Lou Berger is now at [EMAIL PROTECTED] I will let Lou supply the rest of his current address (corporate affiliation, and so on). Ross At 12:07 PM 8/9/2006 -0400, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: Please change the GenART review status to "on the right track, but has open issues". No usable email addr