[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-vandevenne-shared-brotli-format-11

2024-10-01 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-cek-hkdf-sha256-03

2024-09-04 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-12

2024-08-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-3376bis-10

2024-06-03 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-rfc7432bis-08

2024-04-29 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues This is a well written document with a few issues that are editorial in nature. Firstly id-nits picks up a number of issues that need to be addressed: == Missing Reference: 'RFC4448' is mentioned on line 1115, but not defi

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17

2024-02-28 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control-04

2024-02-22 Thread Stewart Bryant
Dear Ines Thanks you for your review. Please see inline. Stewart > On 27 Nov 2023, at 21:41, Ines Robles via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Ines Robles > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews al

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-sfbis-05

2024-02-17 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-dtnma-08

2024-01-03 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-07

2023-11-10 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-mpls-path-segment-16

2023-10-25 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-mcast-09

2023-10-05 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05

2023-07-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21

2023-06-02 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-mac-relaxed-04

2023-04-27 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-ike-09

2023-03-09 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13

2023-02-01 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-mpls-path-segment-08

2022-11-21 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-identity-header-errors-handling-05

2022-11-04 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-yee-ssh-iana-requirements-01

2022-10-22 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-raw-use-cases-07

2022-10-06 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10

2022-08-24 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-01

2022-06-30 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues This simple document is adequate to register the media type as is. There are however a few small issues that could usefully be addressed. The introduction could usefully be expanded to include a couple of sentences on context and a direct

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06

2022-04-28 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-06

2022-02-25 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08

2022-01-20 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05

2021-11-16 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sfc-proof-of-transit-08

2021-09-23 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark-08

2021-08-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark-06

2021-06-07 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09

2021-05-04 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-aes-gmac-alg-03

2021-02-15 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-capacity-metric-method-05

2021-02-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08

2021-02-10 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 2 Feb 2021, at 15:27, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Not Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-33

2021-01-04 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-32

2020-10-28 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init-04

2020-09-03 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-08

2020-07-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 30 Jun 2020, at 17:55, Pete Resnick wrote: > > On 30 Jun 2020, at 7:24, Stewart Bryant wrote: > >>> On 29 Jun 2020, at 18:30, Pete Resnick via Datatracker >>> wrote: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> It is not clear to m

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-16

2020-07-03 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-08

2020-06-30 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 29 Jun 2020, at 18:30, Pete Resnick via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Pete Resnick > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-18 Thread Stewart Bryant
Here is how we should proceed. We make as much progress as we can agree on which will clear some of the issue below. For any remaining issues for which you have wider consensus but where we cannot agree, I modify my review and the IESG decides how they wish to proceed. I am prepared to be in t

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-18 Thread Stewart Bryant
w of > draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14 > Date: Thu, 18 Jun 2020 11:00:15 +0100 > From: Stewart Bryant > <mailto:stewart.bry...@gmail.com> > To: Martin Duke <mailto:martin.h.d...@gmail.com> > CC: tcpm <mailto:t...@ietf.org>, Review Team > <mail

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-18 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 17 Jun 2020, at 18:20, Martin Duke wrote: > > Hi Stewart, > > If there are no further objections, I'm going to declare consensus. > > On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 1:45 PM Martin Duke > wrote: > Stewart, > > do we need more cycles for this, or is draft-15 suff

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-17 Thread Stewart Bryant
Please give me until tomorrow and I will take a look.Life has been a bit busy here,StewartOn 17 Jun 2020, at 18:20, Martin Duke wrote:Hi Stewart,If there are no further objections, I'm going to declare consensus.On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 1:45 PM Martin Duke

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> > > I agree "tunnels" are everywhere - if it's a tunnel, then the path may cross > the Internet, and the considerations concerning path congestion and RTT > variation should be relevant. > > If it's known to be link-local or within a "controlled environment" then one > could choose differ

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 6 Jun 2020, at 08:19, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: > > Please see below. > > On 05/06/2020 17:43, Mark Allman wrote: >> Hi Stewart! >> >> Thanks for the feedback. Sorry for the long RTT. I had a recent >> deadline and am now trying to dig out. >> >>> Major issues: >>> >>> As far as I can s

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 5 Jun 2020, at 17:43, Mark Allman wrote: > > > Hi Stewart! > > Thanks for the feedback. Sorry for the long RTT. I had a recent > deadline and am now trying to dig out. > >> Major issues: >> >> As far as I can see this text only applies to exchanges between >> applications and network

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-05-30 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-14

2020-03-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-04

2020-02-28 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] [dtn] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-21

2020-02-06 Thread Stewart Bryant
gh 10.5, though on re-reading the updated > text I notice that I missed this change in a few places; I'll make those > corrections on the next iteration of the draft. > > Scott > > -Original Message- > From: dtn On Behalf Of Stewart Bryant via Datatracker > Se

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-21

2020-01-31 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-27

2019-12-12 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [EXTERNAL] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 8 Nov 2019, at 15:40, Joe Touch wrote: > > Unix time != the Posix time API. One is a time scale; the other is the > interface to obtain potentially many different time scales. > > I dove into these issues here: draft-touch-time > > Joe Interesting draft, but I am surprised that you do

Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
a number of seconds that have elapsed > since the Epoch (minus an offset, the number of seconds elapsed from the > Epoch to midnight 1 January 2000 UTC). The manner in which that value is > generated doesn’t matter to the protocol. > > Scott > > From: Stewart Bryant

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 8 Nov 2019, at 13:03, lloyd.w...@yahoo.co.uk wrote: > > http://lloydwood.users.sourceforge.net/Personal/L.Wood/publications/wood-ieee-aerospace-2009-bundle-problems.pdf > > T

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
>> >> SB> I think you are saying that you use Unix time, but Unix time >> includes leap seconds by double increment, so I don’t think >> you are using that because that would give you the measurement >> error you are concerned about. I think that what you are using is >> a monotonically increasin

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-07 Thread Stewart Bryant
, but if that is not possible, then the issues should be documented. Whatever the way forward the section on DTN time needs a significant edit. Best regards. Stewart > On 6 Nov 2019, at 19:22, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review re

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17

2019-11-06 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37

2019-09-18 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-18

2019-09-17 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05

2019-08-06 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02

2019-07-30 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05

2019-07-30 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-16

2019-06-27 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04

2019-06-26 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

2019-06-17 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-13

2019-05-13 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-tinymt32-01

2019-05-08 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-22

2019-04-10 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-22

2019-04-10 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03

2019-04-06 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-test-09

2019-03-06 Thread Datatracker on behalf of Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-test-08

2019-02-15 Thread Stewart Bryant
below. Please see inline below for more. BR Zahed On 2019-02-04, 20:29, "Stewart Bryant" wrote: Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-test-08

2019-02-04 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push-21

2018-12-24 Thread Stewart Bryant
On 20/12/2018 15:37, Christer Holmberg wrote: Hi Stewart, Thank You for the review! Please see inline. >Summary: A well written document with some minor points that could use a little >attention. > >Major issues: None > >Minor issues: > >In Figure 1 the following is included: > >

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push-21

2018-12-19 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-org-11

2018-10-23 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-reverse-metric-15

2018-10-17 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

2018-10-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-05

2018-08-27 Thread Stewart Bryant
12:58, Stewart Bryant <mailto:stewart.bry...@gmail.com>> wrote: Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please tr

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-05

2018-08-24 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13

2018-08-14 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] [Ext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-12

2018-08-04 Thread Stewart Bryant
Sent from my iPad > On 4 Aug 2018, at 16:08, Paul Hoffman wrote: > >> On Aug 4, 2018, at 1:53 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant >> Review result: On the Right Track >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-12

2018-08-04 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pals-ethernet-cw-06

2018-07-04 Thread Stewart Bryant
On 03/07/2018 21:37, Brian E Carpenter wrote: This document recommends the use of the Ethernet pseudowire control word in all but exceptional circumstances. That's wrong, it *mandates* this usage with a MUST (first paragraph of section 4). The text with the MUST is "This document

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pals-ethernet-cw-06

2018-07-02 Thread Stewart Bryant
Hi Brian Thank you for your review comments. Please see inline. On 12/06/2018 04:30, Brian Carpenter wrote: Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review result: Ready with Nits Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pals-ethernet-cw-06 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area R

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pals-ethernet-cw-06

2018-06-19 Thread Stewart Bryant
Hi Alissa Yes, we will address all review comments that we receive. - Stewart On 18/06/2018 18:44, Alissa Cooper wrote: Brian, thanks for your review. Andy, thanks for your response; hopefully it means Brian’s comments will be addressed? I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa On Ju

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01

2018-06-07 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-hoffman-dns-in-json-15

2018-05-04 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hoffman-dns-in-json-13

2018-04-16 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08

2018-04-16 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09

2018-04-16 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-egress-protection-14

2018-03-05 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07

2018-03-02 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10

2018-03-02 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-iana-registry-updates-04

2018-02-20 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-05

2018-02-20 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-egress-protection-09

2018-02-19 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis-17

2018-02-16 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

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