[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08

2024-06-12 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-requirements-13

2024-04-30 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07

2024-04-12 Thread Susan Hares
d" or an "or" in the list. Please consider whether you should follow this list format in this section. From: Neil Jenkins Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2024 11:13 PM To: Susan Hares ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-jmap-sharing@ietf.org; IETF JMAP Mailing List ; last-c...@ietf.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07

2024-04-09 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-24

2024-03-04 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-03

2024-02-18 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-10

2024-02-02 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last-call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06

2024-01-09 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Almost Ready GEN-ART review Status: Almost ready Summary Comment: == Multicast distribution can aid the network, so it is important to have a solid standard. Wow! This is an amazing amount of work to combine EVPN and MVPN. I went between RFC6513

Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2023-12-19 Thread Susan Hares
registries-13 Peter Yee Last Call 2023-12-22 draft-ietf-lsr-isis-area-proxy-10 Early review requests: Reviewer DueDraft Elwyn Davies 2023-06-09 draft-ietf-drip-registries-14 Thomas Fossati 2024-01-12 draft-ietf-bess-extended-evpn-opti

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20

2023-10-28 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last-call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-alias-proxy-status-05

2023-10-12 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-reverse-search-24

2023-08-22 Thread Susan Hares
you include comments on rate limiting of reverse RDAP? Thank you, Sue Hares From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Tuesday, August 22, 2023 5:27 AM To: Susan Hares ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-reverse-search@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; reg...@ietf.org Subject: Re: Genart last call

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-reverse-search-24

2023-08-21 Thread Susan Hares via Datatracker
Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-19

2020-10-06 Thread Susan Hares
Gyan: Could you unpack the following statements a bit: Is tunnel type RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP supported. Also RFC 8663 SR-MPLS over IP for SRv6 and SR-MPLS interoperability where MPLS over GRE RFC 4023 is used or RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP and outer encapsulation is IPv6 for SRv6 forwarding

Re: [Gen-art] [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

2019-04-11 Thread Susan Hares
Joel: Thank you for your timely review. Sue -Original Message- From: Idr [mailto:idr-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Saturday, April 6, 2019 10:52 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org;

[Gen-art] FW: [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14

2018-04-05 Thread Susan Hares
Alissa: Here’s Nitin’s response to Peter. Sue Hares From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Nitin Bahadur Sent: Friday, March 23, 2018 2:55 AM To: pe...@akayla.com Cc: i...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [i2rs] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of

Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14

2018-04-05 Thread Susan Hares
Peter and Alissa: Thank you for your careful review. I believe I saw Nitin's reply to Peter's comments in email - so I'll look for that email and forward it. As Shepherd, I will work with the authors to try to address the issues in 2.2, and section 5. >I think there's a discussion missing

Re: [Gen-art] [trill] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-smart-endnodes-08

2018-02-27 Thread Susan Hares
Robert: Thank you for the review and a big thanks for catching the "F" Bit issue in section 4.3. I apologize for letting that slip through my shepherd filter. I suspect I've been reading this draft so often, that I'm starting to miss the obvious. Your point is valid about expanding the

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt

2017-12-12 Thread Susan Hares
Francis: Thank you for reviewing this document. Susan Hares WG Chair -Original Message- From: Francis Dupont [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] Sent: Monday, December 11, 2017 11:30 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication@ietf.org Subject: review

Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

2017-07-25 Thread Susan Hares
Stewart: Thank you for your review! To come back from IETF and immediately complete your review shows awesome dedication! Cheerily, Sue Hares -Original Message- From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Stewart Bryant Sent: Tuesday, July 25, 2017 12:52 PM To:

Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-12

2017-04-27 Thread Susan Hares
Dale: Thank you for taking the time do a second careful review. I can only wish I such an excellent review of documents I am an editor on. Version 14 addresses all of your comments. Sue -Original Message- From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Dale Worley Sent:

Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-12

2017-04-25 Thread Susan Hares
Dale: Thank you for the second review. I'll address these issues along with others later today. Sue Hares -Original Message- From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Dale Worley Sent: Sunday, April 23, 2017 10:05 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i2...@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

2016-06-22 Thread Susan Hares
Francis: Thank you for the reviewing this document. Sue -Original Message- From: Francis Dupont [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] Sent: Wednesday, June 22, 2016 10:22 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-trill-irb@ietf.org Subject: review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt I am

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt

2016-05-05 Thread Susan Hares
Jari: The authors are in California. You will not see their response until after the IESG meeting. Sue Hares (shepherd) -Original Message- From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net] Sent: Thursday, May 05, 2016 6:08 AM To: Francis Dupont Cc: gen-art@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-i2rs-architecture-13

2016-03-19 Thread Susan Hares
Jari: Thank you for your ping. I thought I answered this on March 6th, but alas I did not. I send the response today. Sue -Original Message- From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net] Sent: Thursday, March 17, 2016 4:59 AM To: Russ Housley Cc:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-i2rs-architecture-13

2016-03-19 Thread Susan Hares
Russ: I apologize for the delayed response. I thought I had responded earlier. I appreciate Jari's email that reminded me I had not sent this email. The policy dictates that writes can come from a particular specific source, but we are not requiring things to come on a particular channel.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-i2rs-architecture-07

2015-05-25 Thread Susan Hares
Russ: It is my recollection at version -09 of the architecture document answered these issues. Please confirm this fact. We are heading for a version-10 to resolve the security review given to us in April. Sue -Original Message- From: Russ Housley [mailto:hous...@vigilsec.com]

Re: [Gen-art] [IANA #818133] Last Call: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-03.txt (Clarification of the Flowspec Redirect Extended Community) to Proposed Standard

2015-04-10 Thread Susan Hares
: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-...@tools.ietf.org; idr-cha...@ietf.org; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Mach Chen; Susan Hares; General Area Review Team Subject: Re: [IANA #818133] Last Call: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-03.txt (Clarification of the Flowspec Redirect Extended Community

Re: [Gen-art] [IANA #818133] Last Call: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-03.txt (Clarification of the Flowspec Redirect Extended Community) to Proposed Standard

2015-04-10 Thread Susan Hares
Jeff: Yes, that is the best plan. Sue From: Jeff Haas [mailto:jh...@juniper.net] Sent: Friday, April 10, 2015 7:10 PM To: Susan Hares Cc: drafts-lastc...@iana.org; draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-...@tools.ietf.org; idr-cha...@ietf.org; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Mach Chen

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-bmwg-bgp-basic-convergence-04.txt

2014-11-10 Thread Susan Hares
Joel: Answers below to your questions: -Original Message- From: Joel M. Halpern [mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com] Sent: Thursday, October 30, 2014 6:28 PM To: A. Jean Mahoney; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bmwg-bgp-basic-convergence@tools.ietf.org Cc: IETF discussion list;

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-02

2013-09-06 Thread Susan Hares
Vijay: As the document shepherd this same phrase struck me a different way so I let it go forward. This document is not a panacea, nor is it a deep and thorough approach to flap reduction. My understanding is that some authors (researchers and engineers) were from Japan. As careful

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation-03

2013-02-21 Thread Susan Hares
Jon and Elwyn: I would like to make a correction here. The WG as a body of experts suggested to the author via the Author to IANA. Perhaps as a body of experts, this WG is sufficient to begin this range. Second, the suggestion from the chairs is that IANA might want to allocate a portion of

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation-03

2013-02-21 Thread Susan Hares
Elwyn and Jon: This is an IETF consensus about the draft range. As such, it should be put in the draft as Jon indicated. As a shepherd and a co-chair, my comment to the IANA team is that perhaps they should consider handling out a portion of the whole space. Once it is out, no one ever says

Re: [Gen-art] Spam:*******, Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-idr-as0-05

2012-08-23 Thread Susan Hares
Elwyn: Thanks for sending in the review. Sue -Original Message- From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com] Sent: Thursday, August 23, 2012 8:28 AM To: General Area Review Team Cc: draft-ietf-idr-as0@tools.ietf.org Subject: Spam:***, Gen-art LC review of