[OPSAWG] FW: New Version Notification for draft-tgraf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-04.txt

2022-06-28 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear opsawg working group, draft-tgraf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh defines new IPFIX entities where the SRH and associated control-plane related dimensions are exposed to enable SRv6 data-plane visibility. The draft has been introduced and presented at IETF 113 to OPSAWG and SPRING where we

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05

2022-06-28 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Benoit, On Tue, Jun 28, 2022 at 7:16 PM Benoit Claise wrote: > Hi Dhruv, > > Thanks for reviewing the draft. > See inline. > > On 6/26/2022 4:04 PM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: > > Hi WG, > > I think this work is very useful. I have some comments (also see my review > of the architecture I-D). > >

Re: [OPSAWG] Call for presentation

2022-06-28 Thread Benoit Claise
Hi Tianran, I would like to present draft-claise-opsawg-collected-data-manifest. 15 min would enough. Thanks, Benoit From:Tianran Zhou To:opsawg Date:2022-06-27 04:39:42 Subject:Re: [OPSAWG] Call for presentation When you request a time slot, please include the following information: The

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03

2022-06-28 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Thanks Benoit for the clarifications. I would urge the authors to add some clarification text around these as they see fit. Thanks again for taking my comments into consideration. Regards, Dhruv On Tue, Jun 28, 2022 at 6:51 PM Benoit Claise wrote: > Hi Dhruv, > > Thanks for your review. > See

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05

2022-06-28 Thread Benoit Claise
Hi Dhruv, Thanks for reviewing the draft. See inline. On 6/26/2022 4:04 PM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: Hi WG, I think this work is very useful. I have some comments (also see my review of the architecture I-D). Minor - In the text of the I-D, we should explain that the symptoms are targeted at

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05

2022-06-28 Thread Benoit Claise
Hi Med, Thanks again. See inline for some points On 6/27/2022 10:44 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: Hi Jean, Thank you for the update and the replies. This version looks better. Please see below some pending comments on -06: * I don’t think that the “id” MUST be globally unique”,

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03

2022-06-28 Thread Benoit Claise
Hi Dhruv, Thanks for your review. See inline On 6/26/2022 4:03 PM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: Hi WG, I think this work is very useful. I have some comments - Minor - We need a reference or some discussion of what we mean by "intent" before we jump into SAIN in the Introduction. We could reuse the

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03

2022-06-28 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Jean, I think “model (Section 2 of [RFC8309]) or the network model (Section 2.1 of [RFC8309])” should be “model (Section 2 of [RFC8309]) or the network model (Section 2.1 of [RFC8969]) Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG De la part de Jean Quilbeuf Envoyé : mardi 28 juin 2022 13:18 À : Wubo (lana) ;

Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03

2022-06-28 Thread Jean Quilbeuf
Hi Bo, Thanks a lot for your comments. I addressed them in the current version:  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-06. For point 1: clarified that service is linked to what the service orchestrator is orchestrating. I hope that this solves the

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-06.txt

2022-06-28 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : Service Assurance for Intent-based Networking Architecture Authors : Benoit