Jack, Bob, Brian,
Thanks for your comments!
I agree about the stem; I kinda like the OOF green
stuff, though.
At 100% tiny little beads of nectar (?) are visible on
the stamens, so focus isn't a problem in the original
image. I probably should have sharpened it more for
the jpg conversion.
Ric
Beautiful carnation. Variegated color fringed peddles make a nice
subject.
I think more light on the top and a crisp focus would really help it
pop. Sort of undefined soft lines that would do well to be more clearly
defined.
There is some mildly distracting mottling within the frame that might
be c
Very nice, Rick. I like the translucent effect.
It might be improved by removing the stem on the left and possibly the out of
focus vegetation on the right.
Cheers
Brian
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Brian Walters
Western Sydney Australia
http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/
Lovely and innovative! It would be great to get rid of the stem in
upper left and the other background stuff on the right. You're gonna
set a high bar for the months PUG.
Regards, Bob S.
On Feb 10, 2008 8:50 PM, Rick Womer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Inspired by the lousy snowless January land
Inspired by the lousy snowless January landscape in
Philadelphia and the March PUG topic, I have
undertaken my first explorations of macro photography.
Here is one of the fruits of that effort:
http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6937159&size=lg
K10D, FA 50/2.8 macro, ISO 400, f/11 @ 1/50, R
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