Stephen Gallagher wrote: > Addresses https://fedorahosted.org/sssd/ticket/476 > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > _______________________________________________ > sssd-devel mailing list > sssd-devel@lists.fedorahosted.org > https://fedorahosted.org/mailman/listinfo/sssd-devel nack.
1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was incorrect, because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the discussion was as long as it was. 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this. 3. s/assure/ensure 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages -- David O'Brien Senior Technical Writer, Engineering Content Services Red Hat Asia Pacific Pty Ltd 193 North Quay, Brisbane "We couldn't care less about comfort. We make you feel good." Federico Minoli CEO Ducati Motor S.p.A. _______________________________________________ sssd-devel mailing list sssd-devel@lists.fedorahosted.org https://fedorahosted.org/mailman/listinfo/sssd-devel
