The translation looks good. I've spotted a couple typos s/eligações/e ligações/ and s/azona/a zona/.
The other thing I've noticed, and I don't know very well how to explain it in english, is that the verbs have been conjugated in a way that it seems the writer knows the reader personally (and are friends). What I mean is, "Podes encontrar o web..." is similar to "Tu podes encontrar o web...", using "Tu" is not polite if you don't know the other person. Personally I prefer to see "Pode encontrar o web...". I suppose that teenagers don't care about how it's written but someone the age of their parents (or older) might not like it, I'd say that the flyer should try not to give a bad first impression. Finally, where it says open-source software, does it mean open source or free software[1]? [1] http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html#open-source On 25-10-2013 18:36, Matthias Meisser wrote: > Hi, > > thanks to my colleague Miguel here at ISCTE, we have a first translation > in Portuguese: > http://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/User:!i!/PT_flyer > > So please review and improve it if you like. > We also need a new paragraph on the OSGeo PT, ideally with the same length. > > Bom fim-de-semana, > Matthias > > Am 23.10.2013 18:42, schrieb f.dos.san...@free.fr: >> Funny, today there's a blog speaking of promotional leaflets : > >> http://blog.gravitystorm.co.uk/ > >> I see that the idea of a portuguese flyer is in good shape but didn't know >> how I can help you, I can't speak german ;-) > >> I also think the best pictures are for Lisboa in the low zoom and Porto with >> the high zoom. > >> Francisco. > >> ----- Mail original ----- >> From: "Matthias Meisser" <dig...@arcor.de> >> To: talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >> Date: 23/10/2013 14:56:47 >> Subject: Re: [Talk-pt] Portuguese flyer? > >> Am 21.10.2013 20:45, schrieb f.dos.san...@free.fr: >>> I've not replied because I don't know ;-) > >> Não tem problema ;) > > >>> All the mapping party I've heard have been organized by the OSGeo >>> Local Chapter, I don't think they have an OSM flyer (I hope someone >>> could prove me wrong :-) but it's a very good idea to have one. > >>> They used to have a wiki and a dedicated page for mapping events >>> (but it's down) : > >>> http://wiki.osgeopt.pt/index.php/Vamos_mapear_Portugal > >>> Hopefully some OSGeo members read this list and you'll get an >>> answer, if not we can cross-post to the OSGeo mailing list for a >>> larger audience : > >>> http://lists.osgeo.org/pipermail/portugal/ > >>> Their list is not OSM related but they are a bigger community so >>> they will have better idea for sponsors and publishing partners. > > >> I contacted the OSGeoPT and the president Jorge agreed, that the >> *chapter will spend the money* and deal with the printing if we >> finished the localisation. > >> I also contacted Frederik (Geofabrik chef), if he is ok with replacing >> their promotion at the flyer with an OSGeo 'advertising'. He is very >> ok with that and offered us to create a *high res map rendering* for >> the flyer. > >> So now the question is, *which areas* we like to see at the flyer? >> There is one place at one folding segment and second one what covers >> 2xsegments. At the german flyer they use the city Münster with low >> zoom and Berlin for the bigger area. >> Hmm so use Lisboa and Porto? > >> Matthias > > > > >>> ----- Mail original ----- From: "Matthias Meisser" >>> <dig...@arcor.de> To: talk-pt@openstreetmap.org Date: 21/10/2013 >>> 20:38:19 Subject: Re: [Talk-pt] Portuguese flyer? > >>> As nobody replyed, I like to ask more specific: > >>> Woul it be ok to you, if *I ask some locals* to create portueuse >>> translation of the official flyer? >>> http://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/File:OSM_flyer_2010_thumb.png (I >>> think I will use the more recent version, but sadly its just in DE >>> http://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/File:OSM_flyer_2011_german.jpg) > >>> For *printing* a few thousands that can be spread to local >>> mappers, will there be a organization that likes to sponsor and >>> get's a attribution on the flyer? I would replace the german book >>> with the english edition, ok? >>> http://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/Books#OpenStreetMap:_Using_and_Enhancing_the_Free_Map_of_the_World > > >> Should I ask OSMF or do you know any local sponsor or at least a >>> Portuguese online service to order the prints? > >>> I will try to create another A5 flyer dedicated to the use of the >>> "notes" function, that allows locals to easily contribute more >>> details. IMHO this makes sense, as if they see some empty >>> buildings, they might remember about local POIs? > >>> Matthias > > >>> Am 16.09.2013 18:14, schrieb Matthias Meisser: >>>> Hi everybody, > >>>> as I nearly finished tracing Bing aerials the past weeks, I like >>>> to start with on-the-ground survey which will be photo and >>>> pen&paper mapping: >>>> http://www.openstreetmap.org/#map=16/38.7222/-9.1230&layers=N > >>>> As I'm not looking like a usual Portuguese guy and I can't make >>>> me understandable in the language, I would like to have something >>>> like a flyer, so people can understand what I'm doing. In Germany >>>> there is one [1] and it helped me already, because Germans care a >>>> lot about their privacy (and property ;)). So can anybody tell >>>> me, if the portuguese community has similar "documents" to show >>>> their mission to the residents? > >>>> 1 http://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/Flyers_and_posters > >>>> Greetings from Lisboa, Matthias > >>>> _______________________________________________ Talk-pt mailing >>>> list Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >>>> https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > > > >>> _______________________________________________ Talk-pt mailing >>> list Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >>> https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > >>> _______________________________________________ Talk-pt mailing >>> list Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >>> https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > > > >> _______________________________________________ >> Talk-pt mailing list >> Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >> https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > >> _______________________________________________ >> Talk-pt mailing list >> Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org >> https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > > > > _______________________________________________ > Talk-pt mailing list > Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org > https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt > -- Mauro Santos _______________________________________________ Talk-pt mailing list Talk-pt@openstreetmap.org https://lists.openstreetmap.org/listinfo/talk-pt
