Hi,

On 2017/12/23 9:05, Christos Zoulas wrote:
> In article <e5721d0b-1b44-612e-a23c-ca5e2af52...@iij.ad.jp>,
> Kengo NAKAHARA  <k-nakah...@iij.ad.jp> wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Thank you for your reviewing.
> 
> 
> Thanks for fixing; more nit-picking:
> 1. there is a variable called err instead of error why (all the rest
>    are called error)?

Oh, good catch. I fix it(ipsecif4_fragout()).

> 2. I prefer fewer lines of code, fewer variables for all the copies
>    of those similar functions, like:
> 
> +static int
> +if_ipsec_encap_detach(struct ipsec_variant *var)
> +{
> +
> +     KASSERT(var != NULL);
> +     KASSERT(if_ipsec_variant_is_configured(var));
> +
> +     switch (var->iv_psrc->sa_family) {
> +#ifdef INET
> +     case AF_INET:
> +             return ipsecif4_detach(var);
> +#endif /* INET */
> +#ifdef INET6
> +     case AF_INET6:
> +             return ipsecif6_detach(var);
> +             break;
> +#endif /* INET6 */
> +     default:
> +             return EINVAL;
> +     }
> +}

Exactly. I fix the following duplications.
    + if_ipsec_encap_attach() and if_ipsec_encap_detach()
    + if_ipsec_gather_addr_port() and if_ipsec_set_addr_port()
      - remove if_ipsec_gather_addr_port()
    + sa_len checking in if_ipsec_ioctl()
      - functionize it as if_ipsec_check_salen()

Here is the updated patch series and unified patch.
    - https://www.netbsd.org/~knakahara/if_ipsec/if_ipsec4.tgz
    - https://www.netbsd.org/~knakahara/if_ipsec/if_ipsec4-unified.patch


Thanks,

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Kengo NAKAHARA <k-nakah...@iij.ad.jp>

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