On Mon, Mar 07, 2016 at 06:53:50PM +0000, Sevan Janiyan wrote: > Hi, > Attached diff makes some grammatical adjustments to httpd.conf(5) > > > > Sevan
hi. all of your changes appear to be for the sake of preference, rather than that what's there is incorrect. it would be better then to state why you think your change is neccessary. i don;t feel any of these changes are improvements. language is flexible, that's all. i'm not generally in favour of changing something just because we can. jmc > Index: src/usr.sbin/httpd/httpd.conf.5 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/httpd/httpd.conf.5,v > retrieving revision 1.68 > diff -u -p -u -r1.68 httpd.conf.5 > --- src/usr.sbin/httpd/httpd.conf.5 19 Jul 2015 05:17:27 -0000 1.68 > +++ src/usr.sbin/httpd/httpd.conf.5 7 Mar 2016 18:43:12 -0000 > @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ a host > .Ar address > can be specified by IPv4 address, IPv6 address, interface name, > interface group, or DNS hostname. > -If the address is an interface name, > +If an interface name is referenced, > .Xr httpd 8 > will look up the first IPv4 address and any other IPv4 and IPv6 > addresses of the specified network interface. > @@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ and > .Pp > The > .Ic types > -section must include one or more lines of the following syntax: > +section must include one or more lines in the following syntax: > .Bl -tag -width Ds > .It Ar type/subtype Ar name Op Ar name ... > Set the media > @@ -517,9 +517,9 @@ Include types definitions from an extern > .Pa /usr/share/misc/mime.types . > .El > .Sh EXAMPLES > -The following example will start one server that is pre-forked two > -times and is listening on all local IP addresses. > -It additionally defines some media types overriding the defaults. > +The following example will start one server that is pre-forked twice > +and is listening on all local IP addresses. > +Additionally, it defines some media types, overriding the defaults. > .Bd -literal -offset indent > prefork 2 >
