Luis,
Thanks so much for your work. Here is my own comments reviewing the
beginning of the document.
1. I like the front page but the possibility of server tiddlywiki's
beyond the single file version may be worthy of mention.
2. On page 9 I think it fair to describe the long journey but I think it
worth emphasising each step reveals more power and control to create. Its
a long journey with benifits around every corner - lest to scare some
people off thinking they need to become a master to achieve anything.
Another value is its constructed from the most popular internet
technologies HTML, CSS and Javascript in use so you learn reusable skills.
3. Page 11.
1. This is called Wikitext (a version of markdown and more)
2. change "tiddler inside other tiddler" to "tiddler inside *an*other
tiddler"
4. Page 12. Perhaps at the top right, or in another diagram we could
show how the view and edit template can be used to "see" the tiddler
consisting of title, content, tags and field elements. They Have > elements
> view through >View
> edit
> or custom template
5. Page 14
1. change "Tiddlywiki promote information sharing." to "Tiddlywiki's
promote information sharing" or "Tiddlywiki promotes information sharing"
2. Where is says "Content:“This is the content of the tiddler”.
perhaps add (this is the "text" field)
3. Change "tiddler in edition mode:" to "tiddler in edit mode:"
6. Page 15
1. Change "The format toolbar" to "The editor Toolbar" (official name)
2. at the end of 5.1.2 last paragraph you could add "or look in the
recent tab".
3. Rather than "Open the tiddler $:/TagManager" . perhaps have
"SideBar > Tools > Tag manager or Open the tiddler $:/TagManager"
7. Page 16
1. Change to something like this "A tiddler has fields. There are
system fields like the created and modified date (hidden) but you can add
your own ones."
This could refer to https://tiddlywiki.com/#TiddlerFields
2. 5.1.6 change "Other example: you can make a link of a tiddler
inside other tiddler writting [[ Tiddler Title Linked]]."
to "*An*other example: you can make a link *to* a tiddler inside
other tiddler writing [[Tiddler Title Linked]]." Note also removed a
leading space in "[[Tiddler Title Linked]]"
3. 1.5.7
1. I would remove the spaces from the examples as they will not
work like that.
2. It would be of value to say if one tiddler transcludes, another
tiddler that transcludes another ... it will work but avoid infinite
loops
(Or something better)
4. 1.5.8
1. Where is says "They (View and Edit templates) are tiddlers."
you could add, and Special tags $:/tags/ViewTemplate
and $:/tags/EditTemplate can be placed on any tiddler to make it
appear in
view or edit modes.
2. I would add "Various other templates are and can be used in
tiddlywiki. The View and Edit templates above, are however the most
important to designing your tiddlywiki.
5. 1.5.11 Changed to "1.5.11 Mechanisms"
1. All Change to "elements of tiddlywiki fit together through *a
number o*f mechanism*s*."
6. 1.5.12
1. Change "so the manage of list" to "so the manage*ment* of list
*s*"
2. Check other grammar in this section
I will post more
Regards
Tony
On Thursday, December 12, 2019 at 11:41:06 PM UTC+11, Luis Gonzalez wrote:
> This week I've been focused on the widgets chapter.
>
> I am a little worried about the way to orient this chapter. I've tried to
> apply a progressive approach, from easy to complex. The goal of this
> chapter is not explaining the widgets one by one.
>
>
>
> I need your help in two ways:
>
> 1. Read sections 1 to 6. Are they understandable? Something is missing?
> 2. I have fill the section 7, "Writing your own widgets " with
> information of the Tiddlywiky and Tiddlywiki dev sites, but it is a simple
> copy-paste, I still don't understand this topic well. I need that
> someone rewrite this section with easy instructions.
>
>
> *PLEASE, HELP ME!!*
>
>
> Thanks
>
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