Thanks so much Watt! There are quite a few changes that I really like, specially putting the links to the sections right at the top, breaking the procedure into Step 1 & 2, and the language changes that are nice and friendlier.
Appreciate the time you spent getting things in order. I will rework it again using these good ideas. Cheers! On Tuesday, March 12, 2019 at 1:44:01 AM UTC+7, Watt wrote: > > Hi S. S. > > I looked at your docs and was convinced I could make them shorter. Now > after several hours I realise how bleedin difficult it is to write concise, > comprehensible docs. I salute your achievement! > > I've attached my attempt but it's not much of an improvement as regards > brevity or comprehensibilitytion. I've also messed around with all your > headings so, not only is it nearly the same length, it will also cost you > some time re-doing the anchor links. I won't be offended if you decline the > 'assistance'. > > Thanks for the anchor link addition to TW anyway, it's a useful feature. > Rgds. > > > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TiddlyWiki" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to tiddlywiki+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. To post to this group, send email to tiddlywiki@googlegroups.com. Visit this group at https://groups.google.com/group/tiddlywiki. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/tiddlywiki/027e39df-a82f-41eb-aaa3-83b670193461%40googlegroups.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
