2008/10/1 Danny King <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > I really like the new grey colour and the paper is really good. Can I > ask how you made the paper? > > A few things that I'm not sure about: > > I think the white streaks are too vivid, perhaps try making them more > subtle and seeing how that looks? (maybe it'll be worse, just > speculating). > > The left and right edges are slightly jagged, maybe either add a very > subtle blurred object behind them? > > The top 'lip' of the bin doesn't have a shadow and I think it would > (although, also subtle) > > I think the inside of the empty bin is very dark. If the light is > coming from above it would probably look very similar to the outside? > > The paper looks a little too white to me. > > The recycle icon might look better if it appeared to be etched in to > the plastic? > > The black base at the very bottom of the bin doesn't look like it's > the same material as the rest of the bin - maybe it's too dark. > > I realize this sounds like a very negative response so let me say that > I think your icons are wonderful as they are and I find them very > inspirational, I'm just trying to make them perfect. If anyone > disagrees with any of my suggestions I welcome debate! > > > -- > - Danny King of Gleaming Pixel Web Design. > > Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED] / [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Web: www.GleamingPixel.co.uk > > Are you a web standards web developer that uses open source software? > Say hello, send me a mail! I'm looking for more like me. > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art >
I updated the wiki with full version of the gray one. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions Danny, for the paper, I edited an bitmap in Gimp and then converted to vector in Inkscape. Thank you for your suggestions, I used some of them for the new version. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org
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