@Thorsten step by step in short.

- Setting ubuntu in bold is much more effective to me, and it looks
totally contrary from what you said, much more polisfed and
"sensitive". Should I say that I played a lot with standard Ubuntu
font, and I wasn't satisfied at all, at least considering title font.
And about respecting visual identity. I guess then that I'm totally
irrespective cause I used bold instead standard font. :) I never
wanted to make my cover looks like an official sleeve rip-off.
Othervise this topic would be pointless, as well as a DVD cover
itself.

- About wide tracking... The best I can tell you is that I respect
your opinion. To me it's effective as it could be. Also I should
mention that I played with warious characters spacing. About kerning,
I dont's see anything that wrong, or misplaced.

- I agree that bulleting with a centered text is not that great
choice. That is the part of cover I'm still not satisfied with.

- The big Ubuntu box is not perfectly lined with side boxes, because I
lined the right "live CD" text with upper edge (guideline I set for
myself). So I wanted to make all 4 sides of cover layers to have
proportional distance from edge (you can check it).

Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I alredy changed some stuff after
this version you reviewed, and I will change few more before I release
a complete pack on spreadubuntu, and deviantart. I think this artwork
sum up everything I think about your feedback:
http://theal.deviantart.com/art/Opinion-not-Fact-194945734?q=gallery%3Atheal%2F7848059&qo=1

Cheers my friend.

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