The kerning is off. I think if you're using Photoshop, you can fix it by changing the kerning from 'metrics' to 'optical' and that should fix it. :)
On 11/02/2011, at 8:04 PM, Pumpkin Lord wrote: > @Thorsten step by step in short. > > - Setting ubuntu in bold is much more effective to me, and it looks > totally contrary from what you said, much more polisfed and > "sensitive". Should I say that I played a lot with standard Ubuntu > font, and I wasn't satisfied at all, at least considering title font. > And about respecting visual identity. I guess then that I'm totally > irrespective cause I used bold instead standard font. :) I never > wanted to make my cover looks like an official sleeve rip-off. > Othervise this topic would be pointless, as well as a DVD cover > itself. > > - About wide tracking... The best I can tell you is that I respect > your opinion. To me it's effective as it could be. Also I should > mention that I played with warious characters spacing. About kerning, > I dont's see anything that wrong, or misplaced. > > - I agree that bulleting with a centered text is not that great > choice. That is the part of cover I'm still not satisfied with. > > - The big Ubuntu box is not perfectly lined with side boxes, because I > lined the right "live CD" text with upper edge (guideline I set for > myself). So I wanted to make all 4 sides of cover layers to have > proportional distance from edge (you can check it). > > Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I alredy changed some stuff after > this version you reviewed, and I will change few more before I release > a complete pack on spreadubuntu, and deviantart. I think this artwork > sum up everything I think about your feedback: > http://theal.deviantart.com/art/Opinion-not-Fact-194945734?q=gallery%3Atheal%2F7848059&qo=1 > > Cheers my friend. > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
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