** Branch linked: lp:ubuntu-manual -- Grammar improvement required https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584492 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Manual Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu Manual.
Status in Ubuntu Manual: Confirmed Bug description: 788 Chp 6 p120 Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in the root directory. Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant. Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory." _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
