<godbyk> I think my brain is fried.
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Importance: Medium => Low
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Confirmed => Fix Committed
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: Kevin Godby (godbyk) => Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass)
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Grammar improvement required
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584492
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Bug description:
788
Chp 6 p120
Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.
Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux
file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit
redundant.
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of
folders in the root directory."
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