I've uploaded it here: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-lvelvindron-tls-for-email-02.
I'm looking forward to more feedback. On Mon, Oct 15, 2018 at 5:12 PM Loganaden Velvindron <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thank you Sean. I will update the document and upload it. > > On Sat, Oct 6, 2018 at 5:53 AM Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Mostly just nits/style comments assuming that this moves as fast as > > ID.tls-oldversions-deprectate. > > > > 0) Add updates header “Updates: RFC8314” > > > > 1) Title > > > > TLS is now in the RFC editor’s abbreviations list so the title can now be: > > Use of TLS for Email Submission and Access > > > > 1) Introduction > > > > r/recommended for/recommended version for > > > > r/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate/[ID.tls-oldversions-deprectate] > > and add normative reference to: > > [ID.tls-oldversions-deprectate] Moriarty, Farrell > > > > 2) If I were doing this I would do and OLD/NEW style as below. For the > > shorter changes, you don’t need it but for the s5 and s5.1 changes I was > > like what one earth are they changing. E.g.: > > > > Table of Contents > > > > OLD: > > > > 4.1. Deprecation of Services Using Cleartext and TLS Versions Less > > Than 1.1 > > > > NEW: > > > > 4.1. Deprecation of Services Using Cleartext and TLS > > Versions Less Than 1.2 > > > > Section 4 > > > > OLD: > > > > As soon as practicable, MSPs currently supporting Secure Sockets Layer > > (SSL) > > 2.x, SSL 3.0, or TLS 1.0 SHOULD transition their users to TLS 1.1 or > > later and discontinue support for those earlier versions of SSL and > > TLS.” > > > > NEW: > > > > As soon as practicable, MSPs currently supporting Secure > > Sockets Layer (SSL) 2.x, SSL 3.0, or TLS 1.0 SHOULD transition their > > users to TLS 1.2 or later and discontinue support for those earlier > > versions of SSL and TLS. > > > > etc. > > > > 3) s5 changes > > > > I’d just change the sentences: > > > > OLD: > > > > If, however, an MUA > > provides such an indication, it MUST NOT indicate confidentiality for > > any connection that does not at least use TLS 1.1 with certificate > > verification and also meet the minimum confidentiality requirements > > associated with that account. > > > > NEW: > > > > If, however, an MUA > > provides such an indication, it MUST NOT indicate confidentiality for > > any connection that does not at least use TLS 1.2 with certificate > > verification and also meet the minimum confidentiality requirements > > associated with that account. > > > > 4) Terminology Section > > > > Since you do have 2119 language and you want to avoid the ID-nits you > > probably need a “Terminology Section” with the following text: > > > > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", > > "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and > > "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in > > BCP 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all > > capitals, as shown here. > > > > 5) A little love for tls1.3 > > > > So like we published 1.3 so it can’t hurt to add the reference: > > > > r/MUAs MUST implement TLS 1.2 [RFC5246] or later/MUAs MUST > > implement TLS 1.2 [RFC5246] or later, e.g., TLS 1.3 [RFC8446] > > > > 6) References > > > > Since you’re downgrading 1.1 should we move it to an informative reference? > > > > Again to avoid ID-nits I guess add 1.1 as an informative and TLS 1.2 and > > 1.3 as normative? > > > > 7) Sec Cons > > > > I’d probably add something like see [ID.tls-oldversions-deprectate] for why > > 1.1 is being deprecated. > > > > spt > > > > > > > On Oct 2, 2018, at 06:24, Loganaden Velvindron <[email protected]> > > > wrote: > > > > > > On Fri, Sep 21, 2018 at 3:12 PM Loganaden Velvindron > > > <[email protected]> wrote: > > >> > > >> Dear UTA folks, > > >> > > >> Please find the link here > > >> (https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-lvelvindron-tls-for-email-00.txt) for > > >> the draft for Switching the minimum requirement for TLS in mail from > > >> TLS 1.1 to TLS 1.2. This is inline with what is happening here: > > >> https://github.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/blob/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt > > >> where TLS 1.0 and TLS 1.1 are deprecated. > > >> > > >> > > >> Feedback welcome. > > >> > > > > > > ping. > > > > > >> Kind regards, > > >> //Logan > > >> C-x-C-c > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > Uta mailing list > > > [email protected] > > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/uta > > _______________________________________________ Uta mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/uta
