Thanks for your review, Marco, much appreciated.

All your comments have been addressed in -14.

cheers, t

On Tue, 15 Apr 2025 at 04:24, Marco Tiloca
<[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> I have re-read the document, and I think it's basically ready.
>
> Please find below just a few nits that I could notice.
>
> Best,
> /Marco
>
> ===================
>
> - Section 12
> --- HPKE should actually be referred to as RFC 9180
>
> - Section 17
> --- s/is is/is
>
> - Section 17.1.3
> --- s/utlize/utilize
>
> - Section 17.1.4
> --- s/in accordance to/in accordance with
>
> - Section 17.1.7
> --- s/the a post-handshake/a post-handshake
>
> - Section 17.4.1
> --- s/recommendations what/recommendations about what
> --- s/identifer/identifier
> --- s/recomments/recommends
>
> - Section 18
> --- s/has lead/has led
>
> - Section 19
> --- s/this document RECOMMENDS that/it is RECOMMENDED that
>
>      (RECOMMENDS is not a term from BCP 14)
>
> - Section 20
> --- s/[RFC6979] ECDSA/ECDSA [RFC6979]
>
> --
> Marco Tiloca
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>
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>
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>
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>
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