Document: draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile Title: TLS/DTLS 1.3 Profiles for the Internet of Things Reviewer: Martin Duke Review result: Ready with Nits
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC [email protected] if you reply to or forward this review. There are some transport implications in this draft, particularly Section 10 on timers and ACKs. However, the timer guidance is consistent with BCP 233/RFC 8961. The draft relies on RFC 6520 for MTU discovery and keepalive, so it is not inventing new standards here. However, instead of Section 9 saying that "the discussion is applicable", it's important to actually state the normative requirement, which I presume is that the RFC 6520 heartbeat mechanism is RECOMMENDED. Nit: In section 8, "Implementations may not support these suites", would be a better phrased as "might not." _______________________________________________ Uta mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
