Hi Menachem! Thank you for your Opsdir review and for the helpful readability suggestions.
We addressed your comments as follows: * We expanded the “Conventions and Terminology” section with explicit pointers to the terminology used from TLS, DTLS, X.509/PKIX, IoT device classes, and DevID/IDevID/LDevID terminology. * We added an overview paragraph to the Introduction that explains what the main groups of sections cover. * We replaced several generic references to RFC 5280 in the certificate profile with section-specific references. In particular, the Root CA subject, key usage, extended key usage, and basic constraints text now points to the relevant RFC 5280 subsections. The subordinate CA key usage and EKU guidance also now include specific RFC 5280 section references. * While making these edits, we also clarified the subordinate CA key usage text. Regarding your request for an additional reviewer: the document has also received reviews from other directorates. The PR is here: <https://github.com/thomas-fossati/draft-tls13-iot/pull/203> https://github.com/thomas-fossati/draft-tls13-iot/pull/202 Ciao Hannes
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