Scott,

You are right, and what you suggest is an improvement (just repeating to
myself 'How did you miss the lack of verb?  Huh?')

But now Will 'scenarios' and 'dimensions' look awkward.   How about From
business cards to Highway (here it would be 'road') signs we know print and
design;  and we have many examples to show you.

The urgency of the present tense verb works well, though you probably need
to tweak the suggestion above to get exactly what you want.

Joseph

> > printdesign page:
> > -----From little business cards to huge highway road signs, we have
faced
> > many scenarios and many print dimensions.   >semi-colon or dash would be
> > better than comma.
>
> Disagree. "From little business cards to huge highway road signs" is not
an
> independent clause (where's the verb?), therefore a semi-colon is
> inappropriate. In fact, the comma used is perfectly correct. I think that
I
> would reverse the structure, though, to have
>
>  "We have faced many scenarios and many print dimensions, from little
> business cards to huge highway road signs."
>
> Personally, I think I would prefer "experience with" or "experience in"
over
> "faced," thus
>
>  "We have experience in many scenarios and many print dimensions, from
> little business cards to huge highway road signs."
>
> Cheers,
> Scott
>
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