John Levon wrote:
On Fri, Oct 03, 2008 at 02:27:21PM -0700, Alan Coopersmith wrote:

Thanks for your help John, I've made these changes. Let me know what you think.

Way better already, thanks Michelle.

Note that making "Nevada" == "onnv" will confuse people looking for the sources
to the 80% of Nevada that's outside the ON gate - "Nevada" is the code name for
the entire WOS, of which ONNV is just one of over a dozen consolidations, each
with their own Nevada gate, like SFWNV, X_NV, the Nevada branch of the JDS
Subversion repo, etc.

Indeed, although we don't actually explain what Nevada is on this page
either. Perhaps:

- For instructions about how to clone the Nevada gate and get the closed
- bins you'll need to build, refer to the Nevada Project.
+ If you're looking for the main repository of the core kernel code,
+ libraries and utilities, please refer to the Nevada project.

And maybe move it to just after the mention of the project list.

OK, I've made these changes, let me know if they don't work.

Thanks,
Michelle

regards
john
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