On Tue, Jan 20, 2009 at 7:33 PM, Michelle Olson <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi all, > > I've drafted a feature spot for the test community here: > > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_24 > > Let me know what you think.
My impressions, if I may... - The picture is nice, but I'm not sure if it conveys anything. Most of the graphics up till now have conveyed a particular style, and now we have this picture. Actually, that may not be so bad, but it looks like a small group of computers, and downplays the fact that there are more resources available (virtualization = lots and lots and lots). Is there a "Cabinet 02" or a "OSTF02?" I dunno, could just be me. - I'm not sure, but does "many resources including" need a colon? Or maybe a mix of semi colons because aren't the first three items also a sublist? - The last sentence seems a big over the top. "High Quality" conversation? It's clever, but is it too much? He who would pick a pun... Those QA folk, always wise-cracking. I dunno, could just be me. I'm just wondering if something different could be said to end strongly. - Maybe a little more punch about the test farm being "open" resources, matured test suites, and pretty automated -- from resource request to testing within minutes? No offense, but here' a chunk o' Sun process that works great, works fast, is a thriving and well led group, and is virtually outside the SWAN... I guess I didn't use a semicolon just there so maybe ignore the second bulletin. _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
