Michelle, > Thank you all for your time and effort to review the 4th birthday banner and > page. I've updated both with your changes: > > http://stage.opensolaris.org
Much better! A few edits: - Members: should it be: "community decisions in the annual" (the "in" is missing). - Distributions: "based on OpenSolaris" is ambiguous; perhaps "based on the OpenSolaris codebase" would be more accurate. - Communities: I'm not sure the bit about the original groups is meaningful, or even accurate. I count 2 anniversaries and 2 birthdays. Can we pick one term? > http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/birthday > > There is an alternative banner in orange here: > > http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/bday_banner.jpg I prefer the blue with the current feature spot. -- -Peter Tribble http://www.petertribble.co.uk/ - http://ptribble.blogspot.com/ _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
