Hi Peter,
Thanks for this feedback, very helpful to me, I've made your changes.
-Michelle
Peter Tribble wrote:
Michelle,
Thank you all for your time and effort to review the 4th birthday banner and
page. I've updated both with your changes:
http://stage.opensolaris.org
Much better!
A few edits:
- Members: should it be: "community decisions in the annual" (the
"in" is missing).
- Distributions: "based on OpenSolaris" is ambiguous; perhaps "based on
the OpenSolaris codebase" would be more accurate.
- Communities: I'm not sure the bit about the original groups is meaningful, or
even accurate.
I count 2 anniversaries and 2 birthdays. Can we pick one term?
http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/birthday
There is an alternative banner in orange here:
http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/bday_banner.jpg
I prefer the blue with the current feature spot.
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