it also pushed me to do a small rewrite- the
'sharpness' of your comment, thanks for that!
like i said before, i understand - and respect- your
investment in form, and your irritated expression of
your discontent, made me also relook at things(
someone else on the list liked some things about the
texts, so my ego got its salve too)
i wonder what i should write- on the ongoing
discussion about being 'polite' on the list, what i
think of it.
but perhaps, some people are wary, first time poets,
they need gentle handling. some unused to success
might find failure daunting?
i did not- and your comments did help me. i am older?
my ego is robust? your comments were acerbic, but not
mean?
whatever,
thanks
i like your well poem, shall write more on reading it
some more
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