Re: [ZESTPoets] I have revised.

[ankur prahlad]

Oh.. no 'a'? I thought there was an a.

jane bhandari <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

larvae, surely?

 

larve

turned

to

butterflies.

ankur prahlad <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

Hi Vivek, I have revised the poems. You made me realize once again that without humility there can be no improvement.

 

Here are the revised versions:

 

The Impact of It

 

Looking

through

the reflections

at the

incomprehensible

It

makes us

realize

the reflection

that we

are

 

and we

fly about the

cities

 

larve

turned

to

butterflies.

 

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