please read and comment on this poem. let me know if the idea makes sense or not..
I dont care much for a full-stop
When the sentence is interesting
And wishes to be continued
Pause a poem, force a full-stop
And there will it lose beauty.
Leaving in
black-and-white
What wishes to be hued...
I remember being taught in schools
That terse sentences are more meaningful;
What needs to be grown is thus often subdued
Write your sentences long dear friends,
Simply pour out your hearts,
Dont force a full-stop but take time and wait
For every sentence needs to be construed
Vidyanjali.
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