Poetry is like a river stream which has bends no full stops
it only merges in thoughts --- vidya anjali <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > please read and comment on this poem. let me know if > the idea makes sense or not.. > > I dont care much for a full-stop > When the sentence is interesting > And wishes to be continued > > Pause a poem, force a full-stop > And there will it lose beauty. > Leaving in black-and-white > What wishes to be hued... > > I remember being taught in schools > That terse sentences are more meaningful; > What needs to be grown is thus often subdued > > Write your sentences long dear friends, > Simply pour out your hearts, > Dont force a full-stop but take time and wait > For every sentence needs to be construed > > Vidyanjali. > > > Send instant messages to your online friends > http://in.messenger.yahoo.com ____________________________________________________________ Ram Dutt Tripathi, 55, Gulistan Colony , Lucknow - 226001, Uttar Pradesh , India Tel: 0522-2236762 Fax 0522- 2236763 Alternate Email Address :[EMAIL PROTECTED] Note : This email is confidential. It should be read only by the person whom it has been addressed . If you have received it my mistake , pl delete it from your machine and redirect it to me. __________________________________________ Yahoo! DSL Something to write home about. Just $16.99/mo. or less. dsl.yahoo.com -- You are encouraged to post poetry, respond critically to the poems circulated and participate in discussions. To post, email your message to ZESTPoets@yahoogroups.com OR post online at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/post/ Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
